Don't know what to call this story yet but it is much much bigger than this single chapter.
"But PonyQuest! Who the heck is this Knave guy and why does he sound like your sergal OC charater??"
That's because he changed his name to Matcha later on. I'll get to that at some point.
If this gets as much notice as I think it will, I might post chapter 2 since much more happens in that.
I'm still drilling out up to chapter 5 so just bear with me. It's totally a work in progress and I've had no outside edits done yet. Nothing totally graphic (yet) so it's okay to rate this tragic backstory as PG.
So tear it apart and break it down. I might make a few changes and we'll see how it goes.
Oh and a big thanks to
neala-appaloosa for helping me come up with something worth writing for.
NEXT CHAPTER: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17820456/
"But PonyQuest! Who the heck is this Knave guy and why does he sound like your sergal OC charater??"
That's because he changed his name to Matcha later on. I'll get to that at some point.
If this gets as much notice as I think it will, I might post chapter 2 since much more happens in that.
I'm still drilling out up to chapter 5 so just bear with me. It's totally a work in progress and I've had no outside edits done yet. Nothing totally graphic (yet) so it's okay to rate this tragic backstory as PG.
So tear it apart and break it down. I might make a few changes and we'll see how it goes.
Oh and a big thanks to
neala-appaloosa for helping me come up with something worth writing for.NEXT CHAPTER: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17820456/
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Sergal
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