
A silly little short story I got about
monterrang's fat version of Maud Pie.
In this story Iron Will tries using her as a way to prove his point, but finds her a lot harder to "affect" then what she first seems.
This was just made for fun on a short time so don't take it all to serious.
And also make sure to watch
monterrang's tumblr blog where you can see more of Fat Maud.
http://askmaudfat.tumblr.com/
Inside the middle of the big garden maze was a stage that was often use for many different ponies (and non-ponies) to have different seminar's or speeches.
One of those who often used this spot was Iron Will, a minotaur who had been specialised into making great big stage shows telling ponies how to build up their bad self-confidence, and now he was here again to do just that.
He had been visiting Pony-Ville several times before (Since he knew the ponies living there where all very easy to trick with rhymes and flashy effects.), and today was thought to be just like the other ones.
"Hello every pony!" He said as he made his big entry, coming out from a cloud of smoke and taking off a big red robe with his name pressed on it. And as he had expected the response was instant, with pretty much almost all the ponies stomping their hooves into the ground enthusiastically.
"Today I have come to teach you all about how you should never be feared the size of anyone you meet, as YOU always will be the biggest one of the two no matter what the other one says!" Iron Will said, and his huge audience all looked very interested in what this would be.
"But to prove my point to this I would first need to ask some pony to come up here so that I can demonstrate it for the rest of you."
Almost immediately a good bunch of the ponies started raising hooves, wanting to be the one getting picked by the great speaker.
But Iron Will had already in mind who he would pick. He wasn't alone doing this, as he had in fact several goat servants who was both working his equipment and organising his audience.
And for that part they where also helping him pick out a certain pony that would look like the perfect "easy prey" for Iron Will to prove how "Large and in charge" he was, and they seemed to have found a perfect one right now.
By sending small signals through bleating the goats messaged Iron Will that there was standing a very "Big female pony" at the back of the crowd.
Seeing this as the perfect target Iron Will pointed out to the audience and shouted "You! The pony wearing the dress with a black belt in the back!", making all the ponies standing in the way to move aside to make that pony visible to the rest.
The pony in question was none other then Maud Pie, Pinkie Pie's older (and fatter) sister.
"Come up to the stage! Now!" Iron Will ordered, and Maud did as he said. (But mostly because she felt that she didn't have anything better to do at the moment.)
"I, Iron Will, is now going to show you how while somebody might look big and hard to get around, you should NEVER let that actually block you!" He said, and headed straight towards the unknowing Maud.
"If some pony in front of you is blockin', you're simply floppin'!...Hurgh!?" Iron Will said as he had planned to simply push the fat pony away, but found her hard as a rock and impossible to move!
Trying time and time again to make her move, he found out that it was almost like she was having her whole insides filled with boulders, and Iron Will had to actually take a short break to catch some air.
"Huh!...Gasp!...This is much harder then it looks all ponies, and that's why you must show them who's boss, and never give up!" He told the others. (But he was wondering if maybe he shouldn't just give you.)
Instead of trying to make her move on her own he was deciding to lift her up and move her away, but that would pretty soon prove to be a challenge on it's own!
First of all she was so wide that he barley got any room around her to grab her with his big hands, and after finally getting a grip he could barley lift her once inch above the ground!
Starting to feel really motivated to prove to himself that he could do this he took off his trademark tie, and then started do several quick exercise movements. Push Ups, Sit Ups, and running a few laps around Maud. All to build up the adrenaline, and get his muscles pumping!
When he could feel the heat running through his blood he knew it was now or never! Now was the time he was going to show this fat ass how it's done.
He got a new grip on the fat pony, and with all his strength he managed to lift her up and hold her above his head...only to feel how something under his hoofs where starting to crack.
CRASH!
Before he had a chance to do anything Iron Will came crashing through the wooden stage floor! (And it ended right when Maud's feet was on the same level as the stage floor.
Maud Pie looked down at the Minotaur (Who's arms was just about the only thing visible right now.) and said, "If you wanted me to move you could have just ask me nicely." before getting of the stage herself.
Dragging himself up to his waist Iron Will looked at his pony audience (While now sporting a black eye, and missing one of his horns.) and said "That is also one way you can do it." before losing his grip in his hands and falling completely through the hole.

In this story Iron Will tries using her as a way to prove his point, but finds her a lot harder to "affect" then what she first seems.
This was just made for fun on a short time so don't take it all to serious.
And also make sure to watch

http://askmaudfat.tumblr.com/
Inside the middle of the big garden maze was a stage that was often use for many different ponies (and non-ponies) to have different seminar's or speeches.
One of those who often used this spot was Iron Will, a minotaur who had been specialised into making great big stage shows telling ponies how to build up their bad self-confidence, and now he was here again to do just that.
He had been visiting Pony-Ville several times before (Since he knew the ponies living there where all very easy to trick with rhymes and flashy effects.), and today was thought to be just like the other ones.
"Hello every pony!" He said as he made his big entry, coming out from a cloud of smoke and taking off a big red robe with his name pressed on it. And as he had expected the response was instant, with pretty much almost all the ponies stomping their hooves into the ground enthusiastically.
"Today I have come to teach you all about how you should never be feared the size of anyone you meet, as YOU always will be the biggest one of the two no matter what the other one says!" Iron Will said, and his huge audience all looked very interested in what this would be.
"But to prove my point to this I would first need to ask some pony to come up here so that I can demonstrate it for the rest of you."
Almost immediately a good bunch of the ponies started raising hooves, wanting to be the one getting picked by the great speaker.
But Iron Will had already in mind who he would pick. He wasn't alone doing this, as he had in fact several goat servants who was both working his equipment and organising his audience.
And for that part they where also helping him pick out a certain pony that would look like the perfect "easy prey" for Iron Will to prove how "Large and in charge" he was, and they seemed to have found a perfect one right now.
By sending small signals through bleating the goats messaged Iron Will that there was standing a very "Big female pony" at the back of the crowd.
Seeing this as the perfect target Iron Will pointed out to the audience and shouted "You! The pony wearing the dress with a black belt in the back!", making all the ponies standing in the way to move aside to make that pony visible to the rest.
The pony in question was none other then Maud Pie, Pinkie Pie's older (and fatter) sister.
"Come up to the stage! Now!" Iron Will ordered, and Maud did as he said. (But mostly because she felt that she didn't have anything better to do at the moment.)
"I, Iron Will, is now going to show you how while somebody might look big and hard to get around, you should NEVER let that actually block you!" He said, and headed straight towards the unknowing Maud.
"If some pony in front of you is blockin', you're simply floppin'!...Hurgh!?" Iron Will said as he had planned to simply push the fat pony away, but found her hard as a rock and impossible to move!
Trying time and time again to make her move, he found out that it was almost like she was having her whole insides filled with boulders, and Iron Will had to actually take a short break to catch some air.
"Huh!...Gasp!...This is much harder then it looks all ponies, and that's why you must show them who's boss, and never give up!" He told the others. (But he was wondering if maybe he shouldn't just give you.)
Instead of trying to make her move on her own he was deciding to lift her up and move her away, but that would pretty soon prove to be a challenge on it's own!
First of all she was so wide that he barley got any room around her to grab her with his big hands, and after finally getting a grip he could barley lift her once inch above the ground!
Starting to feel really motivated to prove to himself that he could do this he took off his trademark tie, and then started do several quick exercise movements. Push Ups, Sit Ups, and running a few laps around Maud. All to build up the adrenaline, and get his muscles pumping!
When he could feel the heat running through his blood he knew it was now or never! Now was the time he was going to show this fat ass how it's done.
He got a new grip on the fat pony, and with all his strength he managed to lift her up and hold her above his head...only to feel how something under his hoofs where starting to crack.
CRASH!
Before he had a chance to do anything Iron Will came crashing through the wooden stage floor! (And it ended right when Maud's feet was on the same level as the stage floor.
Maud Pie looked down at the Minotaur (Who's arms was just about the only thing visible right now.) and said, "If you wanted me to move you could have just ask me nicely." before getting of the stage herself.
Dragging himself up to his waist Iron Will looked at his pony audience (While now sporting a black eye, and missing one of his horns.) and said "That is also one way you can do it." before losing his grip in his hands and falling completely through the hole.
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Horse
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 29.5 kB
Comments