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It's too early for Halloween costumes, but it's not too late for Ace to try one on (anymore)…
A quick little thing I wrote at RF and basically forgot about since then. Nothing much, just a little regressive fun. I've actually had this idea for months, which is why it's more appropriate for a period in, say, June, rather than a fourth of the way through the month of Halloween. Whoops. XD
I'll hopefully have more stories to post soon, and may be opening for commissions. I've been a little busy with some long-term projects (been working on the book!) so my shorter stuff has fallen a bit by the wayside temporarily. Anyway, thanks for reading and sticking around!
Starring
acepup
Featuring my character Jay
Story by me
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brevity
A quick little thing I wrote at RF and basically forgot about since then. Nothing much, just a little regressive fun. I've actually had this idea for months, which is why it's more appropriate for a period in, say, June, rather than a fourth of the way through the month of Halloween. Whoops. XD
I'll hopefully have more stories to post soon, and may be opening for commissions. I've been a little busy with some long-term projects (been working on the book!) so my shorter stuff has fallen a bit by the wayside temporarily. Anyway, thanks for reading and sticking around!
Starring
acepupFeaturing my character Jay
Story by me
Thumbnail from this picture by
brevity
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Dog (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 5.6 kB
Listed in Folders
Hmm, my only critic is that it feels very rushed, normally I wouldn't complain but this is you! Your the best AR writer I know a king when it comes to explaining with out explaining. I think if this idea was a little more fleshed out then I would have been a lot Better but for what it is it's still your work so it's still good.
Oh, it definitely was rushed: I wrote it in a quiet evening during RF, and it was like the only writing I got done for an entire weekend. I've also been out of practice a little bit due to working on a series bible behind the scenes. I definitely agree with your critique there, don't worry. I may rewrite and repost this later. But thank you for reading and enjoying it. :)
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