Sarah enjoys a bit of time off in the city park with a book and some hot chocolate
Category All / All
Species Reptilian (Other)
Size 754 x 950px
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He meant by this Velma person.
And yes, I know that's NOT Velma... it's just her clothes that struck our faces like no tomorrow.
And yes, I know that's NOT Velma... it's just her clothes that struck our faces like no tomorrow.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8561687/ here she is. she is one of the ones i sadly to rarely draw
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4808143/ and here we see her less casual look
the hand holding the book looks a bit off, the thumb to be exact. And the leafs on the tree and bush look rushed they could use some defining or more detail in the background it's fine but for the foreground it just looks... Sorry to say it but, Lazy. And some extra detail on the grass under the bench would make it look much better considering the effort you put into the tree bark, bench and trash cancompared to... well, I think you know what I'm trying to say.
The shading:
Her clothes make me think the light is coming from the left of the screen, But her feet and the bench shadows behind her back make me think it's coming from the top... I'd assume the light source is coming from the top left corner, if this is the case there is some shadows missing to the right of her tail (on the bench) as well as the bushes shadow in the foreground, Plus the shading in the background trees could stand to be defined more...
Just remember that these are MY personal opinions.
The shading:
Her clothes make me think the light is coming from the left of the screen, But her feet and the bench shadows behind her back make me think it's coming from the top... I'd assume the light source is coming from the top left corner, if this is the case there is some shadows missing to the right of her tail (on the bench) as well as the bushes shadow in the foreground, Plus the shading in the background trees could stand to be defined more...
Just remember that these are MY personal opinions.
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