
Written for Phoenix, as he suggested it. I kind of turned it into something for myself as well... I know I left it at a cliff-hanger, but I did this for free... so If anyone wants a continuation, they gotta commission it from me.
If you are in this and I mis-represented your character, I apologize!!! Just tell me and I'll be sure to do better!!!
Oh, and this features: Myself, Roco, Phoenix, Mina, James, Red, and Quicksilver.... oh! And Kami!!!
Please be honest in your comments....
If you are in this and I mis-represented your character, I apologize!!! Just tell me and I'll be sure to do better!!!
Oh, and this features: Myself, Roco, Phoenix, Mina, James, Red, and Quicksilver.... oh! And Kami!!!
Please be honest in your comments....
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 29.5 kB
Very nice Nila. You did a great job with so little information I gave ye. I might have to pester you for more stories in the future. Epsecially loved how you got Phoenix and Quicksilver down so well. And that surprise ending is rather amusing. Makes me wonder if your plotting to add more to it later, or do a sequel.
*grins* I adore this piece, hun... It's so warm and loving, and everyone was portayed perfectly. Kami's really cute, too.
Of course, the bickering with James and Quicksilver made me laugh, and you really created the family atmosphere very well... I can't wait to see another piece from you, Nila. ^^
Of course, the bickering with James and Quicksilver made me laugh, and you really created the family atmosphere very well... I can't wait to see another piece from you, Nila. ^^
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