Very eerie, I like :D I always have respect for people who can work with sound, its something I utterly lack skill in XD

beautiful TWT so calm to a soul lime mine

I think perhaps one of the voices is too high compared to the other, it sort of drowns it out. I miiiight be saying the words a little too fast too...hmm... I'm no music expert I dunno. Maybe a little less high pitched is the trick, it's supposed to sound creepy right? I dunno if any of the suggestions will help or not, I have no idea how to make music. XD

Yeah... the thing is, i can't have the two voices the same, because then it's hard to hear either of them... even though they're different octaves and mixed so that they have different frequency spikes, it's hard juggling them. I chose the higher one to be the main one, which i think is best... i dunno. it just sounds messy no matter how i mix it... could also be the recording too.

To me it sounds like a score for a movie. Something slow and emotional aching. Tugging at your heart strings, or letting you know of another's sorrows. Personally, I think I came out excellent. Nice job.

what do you use for this(to make)? it is good!

I used Reason and Adobe Audition for this one. Thanks!

It's a very interesting mix of harmonies. Odd, certainly unsettling. I get into the sweet melody of the instruments but then the voices keep me uncomfortably jarred. I would say, it describes the days for me when I'm so deep into my depression the pain and sorry become bittersweet, painfully sweet.

I'll be honest, this isn't my thing as far as listening music goes, but by god do I love it for setting a mood and expressing a very real emotional state. This is art.