What a start! Way to leave us hanging! So many tensions being raised! And still two parts left? I like how you've placed all your characters relations on the rocks at this point, setting up for what's sure to be a crazy climactic finish. A strong start for this three part finale extravaganza!

The only glaring issue I had with it is still in some of the explanations. Like in the instance of Carina's father being a purist of sorts, I think you elaborated a bit too much on that and the narrative got sidetracked because of it. Consider condensing these exposition sections a bit, especially if it's something like that because it reads more as a character bio than a story. The explanations on things like Yggdrasil however, are quite well done.

Well, I had been planning to show the character relations in other stories. Carina's family, their friends, and stuff happening elsewhere that related to them. But with all the projects I'm working on and real life I just decided to throw bits in the final story. Maybe someday I'll do a reboot but not anytime soon. Glad you liked it!

I just downloaded the story. I´ll try to read it soon and give my opinion to you :3

Hope you like it!