
Days after the events of the Mountaintop Massacre, the colossal mercenaries of the Transnational Glacis Consortium are still dealing with the repercussions. TV news pundits are calling for their arrest, execution, or sainthood, depending on political views. A long-simmering military standoff threatens to boil into open war. Blood still stains the streets of a sleepy Canadian alpine town. And Agents Spotzkrieg, Zodiac, and Platemail are stuck with their own thoughts about witnessing the deaths of hundreds of innocent civilians.
That's what Dispatch is for. Dispatch, the everpresent voice in their headsets, their coach, commander, and companion. But there's a person behind that voice. That person has problems all her own, but something has to be done. She can't just leave her girls on their own, never again.
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A side story in the Hazard Pay series of military macrofur works. This one doesn't have any rampaging or violent assaults, just getting to know our cast a little better. My thanks again to all the people out there who've read for me, provided suggestions or advice, edited, or just plain encouraged me to keep writing.
That's what Dispatch is for. Dispatch, the everpresent voice in their headsets, their coach, commander, and companion. But there's a person behind that voice. That person has problems all her own, but something has to be done. She can't just leave her girls on their own, never again.
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A side story in the Hazard Pay series of military macrofur works. This one doesn't have any rampaging or violent assaults, just getting to know our cast a little better. My thanks again to all the people out there who've read for me, provided suggestions or advice, edited, or just plain encouraged me to keep writing.
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Rabbit / Hare
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 29.2 kB
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So Platemail was raised from the begging to be a super titian. Makes sense when you think about. I think you mention earlier how titans grow based on how often their fed. Real interesting. Also nice touch with the radio broadcast talking to folks about the the town incident. While lives were saved not everything ends in a happily ever after. That's not how real life works so good job. Though I would have liked it more if we got a chance to hear some more on that front but still a nice touch anyway.
Another thing I found amazing is how people in that era can build structures big enough and strong enough to house giants. Comfortably might I add. Certainly not impossible. Some underground caves are not only strong enough to support the weight of a mount but hold an interior building. Science! And maybe a little math. Last but not least the potential for war over the deaths of the three titians. Can titians truly be relevent in this war. I mean a country like South Korea might not have the full milltary might of other countries but their certainly advanced enough to build Aliens style auto turrets. http://gizmodo.com/5955042/south-ko.....m-three-clicks . Unless their armor is made of adamantium and vibranium the titans will only make larger targets. But that's just me. Good read.
Another thing I found amazing is how people in that era can build structures big enough and strong enough to house giants. Comfortably might I add. Certainly not impossible. Some underground caves are not only strong enough to support the weight of a mount but hold an interior building. Science! And maybe a little math. Last but not least the potential for war over the deaths of the three titians. Can titians truly be relevent in this war. I mean a country like South Korea might not have the full milltary might of other countries but their certainly advanced enough to build Aliens style auto turrets. http://gizmodo.com/5955042/south-ko.....m-three-clicks . Unless their armor is made of adamantium and vibranium the titans will only make larger targets. But that's just me. Good read.
I figure that the titan stable would easily be among the biggest buildings in our world. Things like the NASA Vehicle Assembly Building and the Boeing center are big enough to have their own weather. Of course, to the supertitans, it feels more like a cramped college dorm, but at least they have their own rooms instead of just sleeping out under the stars!
As fo the war? The faceoff between South and North Korea (because that's obviously what they are here, no matter how I work around it) is too big to have titans play a role. They'd get blasted apart by ATGMs or aerial support in minutes. Titans are meant for fighting against unequipped and unorganized forces, as the stories keep saying. But you know that North Korea would keep a big roster of supertitans on hand anyway, to show off how "rich" and "powerful" they are.
Glad as always that you like it! Any ideas on what should come next?
As fo the war? The faceoff between South and North Korea (because that's obviously what they are here, no matter how I work around it) is too big to have titans play a role. They'd get blasted apart by ATGMs or aerial support in minutes. Titans are meant for fighting against unequipped and unorganized forces, as the stories keep saying. But you know that North Korea would keep a big roster of supertitans on hand anyway, to show off how "rich" and "powerful" they are.
Glad as always that you like it! Any ideas on what should come next?
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