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It's over!

If you have any comments or critiques for me at this point--especially if you read the whole thing--please feel free to comment here! I'd love to know what you thought of this. (Please keep in mind, however, that the art is two years old. I already know a lot of what is wrong with that.)


(p.s. here is a link to the easier-to-read Weasyl version: https://www.weasyl.com/submission/1.....-page-12-final)


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As for this page, some translations:

The big character on the flag just says "yu" -- it means "hot water" and is a common sight at Japanese public baths (onsen). The smaller character inside the circle on the flag is "onna" -- woman (most onsen are sex-segregated).

The characters in the bottom right of the comic say "owari" -- which means, basically, "the end."