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Ever wonder about little Caldma? You know, the cute, Baby Scorchio who always seems to be doing nothing else but causing trouble for Zarra all the time? Well, the time has finally come for him to tell his story. The only question is, what kind of story will it be?
Inspired by the many thoughtful remarks made by those who read "Zarra's Great Adventure" and "Zarra's New Friend," this tale will serve as the final in the series of getting to know three good friends who, in actuality, were brought together as a result of the little guy who finally gets a say in this very tale. I wonder what could possibly be milling around in that cute, little head of his?
CHAPTER 8:
It appears Meuka is up to his old mischief again. The question is now whether Caldma has what-it-takes after all this time to finally take the slime ball down?
It's a flaming booger of battle in this next-to-last segment in the tale. Will Caldma come up on top? Read and find out! :)
SPECIAL NOTE:
As before, I wrote this entire story without the use of my vision. The screen reader program, JAWS, allowed me to express the creative nuances of this tale without having to strain my eye that is still healing from the surgery I recently underwent.
On a refereshing note, though, I learned quite a bit while writing "Zarra's New Friend" and hope it shows while you review over this story. I'm not quite to par with my natural ability, but I believe I'm getting really close. Thank you all for your patience and comments. They have really been inspiring and re-assuring.
Inspired by the many thoughtful remarks made by those who read "Zarra's Great Adventure" and "Zarra's New Friend," this tale will serve as the final in the series of getting to know three good friends who, in actuality, were brought together as a result of the little guy who finally gets a say in this very tale. I wonder what could possibly be milling around in that cute, little head of his?
CHAPTER 8:
It appears Meuka is up to his old mischief again. The question is now whether Caldma has what-it-takes after all this time to finally take the slime ball down?
It's a flaming booger of battle in this next-to-last segment in the tale. Will Caldma come up on top? Read and find out! :)
SPECIAL NOTE:
As before, I wrote this entire story without the use of my vision. The screen reader program, JAWS, allowed me to express the creative nuances of this tale without having to strain my eye that is still healing from the surgery I recently underwent.
On a refereshing note, though, I learned quite a bit while writing "Zarra's New Friend" and hope it shows while you review over this story. I'm not quite to par with my natural ability, but I believe I'm getting really close. Thank you all for your patience and comments. They have really been inspiring and re-assuring.
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Oh wow! Well, I guess I dunno exactly he was defeated since I don't know much about Neopets, but it sounds neat to me! :3 The marble did it... but was it a fire marble thing all along, or did it have to hang out in his diaper? Maybe he tried that before, I don't know... or WAIT.
I think maybe it just came to me but I'm not sure. 8D
In the dream he wet himself... normally, that would probably put a fire out, like the marble? But he didn't do that this time, so it was still firey enough to work? Ehehe, at least that makes sense to me! :3
But then I dunno why adult neopets couldn't hide the marble somewhere and throw it at him either... Hehe, but I'll keep thinking on it. :3 Otherwise, I see that he threw the marble thing at him and beat him - just figuring out the why in my head still. :D And that way it shows how much he's grown up.
It looks like things are neatly wrapped up here! I'm glad there's another chapter, since it would have been too sudden to say everything and then end the story... so I'm off to read the rest! :D
I think maybe it just came to me but I'm not sure. 8D
In the dream he wet himself... normally, that would probably put a fire out, like the marble? But he didn't do that this time, so it was still firey enough to work? Ehehe, at least that makes sense to me! :3
But then I dunno why adult neopets couldn't hide the marble somewhere and throw it at him either... Hehe, but I'll keep thinking on it. :3 Otherwise, I see that he threw the marble thing at him and beat him - just figuring out the why in my head still. :D And that way it shows how much he's grown up.
It looks like things are neatly wrapped up here! I'm glad there's another chapter, since it would have been too sudden to say everything and then end the story... so I'm off to read the rest! :D
<LoL!> You give me too much credit in meaning. Actually, "The Flaming Scorchio Battle Marble" is a weapon you can buy on Neopets that is Scorchio specific.
This brings up a neat note from back on "The Circle" comics you did. You, unlike I, are VERY good with symbolisms. The "Tombstone Circle" and "Nailgun Circle" really threw me for a loop as, initially, I thought the artifact sitting out of the ground was a simple marker where, as our discussions and the comic showed, the particular item used to display NGG's grave was more meaningful then being simply a cute marker. :)
Now on a fun note, which is interesting to think of, is how Caldma had been defeated so many times prior to this encounter. For him, he figured doing the "baby" act would distract Meuka long enough for him to use his keen agility and strength to make one, solid attack. This works out because, uniquely, Neopets keep their stats even when they are painted different colors. So, despite his size, he still has the might he had when he was a full grown, Green Scorchio. So, for Meuka, "SURPRISE!"
This brings up a neat note from back on "The Circle" comics you did. You, unlike I, are VERY good with symbolisms. The "Tombstone Circle" and "Nailgun Circle" really threw me for a loop as, initially, I thought the artifact sitting out of the ground was a simple marker where, as our discussions and the comic showed, the particular item used to display NGG's grave was more meaningful then being simply a cute marker. :)
Now on a fun note, which is interesting to think of, is how Caldma had been defeated so many times prior to this encounter. For him, he figured doing the "baby" act would distract Meuka long enough for him to use his keen agility and strength to make one, solid attack. This works out because, uniquely, Neopets keep their stats even when they are painted different colors. So, despite his size, he still has the might he had when he was a full grown, Green Scorchio. So, for Meuka, "SURPRISE!"
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