A collaboration between me and
Monterrang where I made a story and he did a couple of images to it.
In it his fat version of Maud Pie is doing Fluttershy company as they walk through the Everfree Forest at nigh, when suddenly a darker side of Fluttershy makes herself present again!
In this link you will find both the image that is in my thumbnail AND an image of what happens after the end of my story. (So make sure to finish reading my story first before you click it so you wont be confused on what's going on. )
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18111275/
Follow Monterrang's Fat Maud on her own Tumblr Blog.
http://askfatmaudpie.tumblr.com/
Maud Pie and Fluttershy is from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, and belongs to Hasbro Studios.
Happy Halloween Everybody!
It was during a dark and windy October night where Fluttershy and Maud Pie (Pinkie's fat sister) found themselves wandering through the infamously dangerous Everfree Forest!
Maud had been coming over for a short visit to her sister, where Pinkie had been throwing yet another to celebrate their ever growing friendship. (And Maud's ever growing stomach, as she ate almost all of the cake that Pinkie had baked!)
After the party all the ponies where heading back home, and Fluttershy had been giving Maud the generous offer to let her sleep over at her cottage.
On their way Fluttershy said that she knew about a "short cut" they could take, and that had now lead them completely lost instead!
"So...You knew about a short cut?" Maud said after being quiet for most of their journey, making Fluttershy confused on if she was trying to ask her that in a rhetorical way. (As Maud always had that exact way of speaking.)
"Yes I did. But I didn't count on it to be so dark out here. That makes it a little harder to know how everything looks like." Fluttershy answered.
"But we are in October now. Shouldn't you know that it will get darker much more quick now?" Maud asked, once again making Fluttershy unsure if she is mocking her behind her back or not.
"I was just hoping for something to..."light it up" a little bit." Fluttershy said, as she was actually starting to get a little annoyed now. "Just something simple like Fireflies, Glowing Moss, or...Oh No!" She suddenly said.
Looking up the yellow Pegasus could see the full moon appearing from behind the clouds, and it was starting to mess with her mind. (And body!)
She let out what sounded like a high pitched blip as fangs grew out of her mouth, her ears got more pointy, and her wings transformed from her normal feathery ones to ones made of skin!
She had become Flutterbat once again!
Maud was just about to ask what had just happen to her friend, when said friend took and dug her fangs into her neck!
"YEOOOOOSH!!!!" Maud shouted loudly! (For once breaking her monotone voice that she otherwise where known for.)
The fat mare felt very dizzy as the vampire pony let go off her neck, and how changes started to happen to her as well.
Just like with her friend Fluttershy she got Fangs and pointy Ears, but she could also feel something build up under her dress. And before she knew it she felt how two holes got ripped up, and suddenly she was sporting wings as well!
Feeling her new wings flap a few times Maud Bat looked over at Flutterbat, who said "How doesss it feel?"
"SSSSSurprissssingly good." Maud Bat said, noticing that the fangs made her hold on to her S's when she was speaking.
There was then a bit of a silence between the two until Maud Bat asked "SSSo what sssshall we do now?"
"We'll eat!" Flutterbat said, and Maud Bat was about to say something when her fat belly spoke for her.
GROWL!!!
"I could usssse ssssome more mealsssss." Maud Bat said, while rubbing her belly with one of her new found wings.
"Exccccellent! I know jussst the placccessss for ussss to go to. Follow me!" Flutterbat said, and lifted herself off the ground with her wings.
Maud tried to do the same thing, but her added weight made it impossible for her to lift, so she decided to just follow her fellow vampire pony on foot instead.
After following Flutterbat's nose for some time both Vampire Ponies found themselves in some familiar territory.
The Apple Family's Apple Farm!
For Flutterbat who had done this before this was like a buffet of sweets for her to consume, but Maud was still a little bit lost on this whole "Being a Vampire pony" thing, so she asked "Why did you take ussss here?"
"To feassst of coursssse!" Flutterbat said before she flied pass a few trees, and came back holding a small bunch of apples in her hooves.
"Try one." She said and handed on over to Maud Bat, who in return refused her offer and said "I'm more into rockssss."
"Oh, but I can garantee that you will find thissss much more appealing to your tasssste budssss." Flutterbat said and once again forced the apple onto her friend. (This time letting go of it herself so that Maud had to hold it.)
"Fine. I'll taste it then." Maud Bat sighed and then put her new fangs into the red fruit.
The taste of the apple was really amazing! The sweet and sugary juices of the fruit had been pretty okay for Maud before when she was just a pony, but as this "Bat thing" she was now it tasted like the most wonderful and addicted treat of her life! (Even more then Candy Rocks!)
Even though inside of her, her body just wanted to shout out how delicious and great this is, all that came out of her mouth was a blank "It tastesssss good."
"Sssso what will we do now?" Maud Bat asked after finishing her one apple. "Sssshall we jusssst eat the resssst of the applessss on the farm?"
"No. To easssy." Flutterbat said, and started to sniff the air again until she got the catch of something.
"Oh yessss! I can feel how they have sssstored the besssst applesssss in the barn! Applessss that have no bugssss crawling over them, not being sssssour, nor rotten! Applessss that have been wassshed and are ready for sssselling tomorrow!" Flutterbat said, rambling so that saliva was starting to drip from her fangs!
Maud Bat was just standing behind her and listen, and when she was finished the fat Bat Pony asked "Can your nose really smell all that?", to which Flutterbat answered back a proud "Yessss!"
Flutterbat lead her partner towards the big barn on the apple farm, and as they got closer even Maud Bat started to feel the smell of the special selected apples.
Once outside Flutterbat open up the big barn doors, and then closed them once they both where inside.
Thanks to their new changes as Bat Ponies they could both see in the dark, and what they saw got their jaws dropping in amazement.
Inside the barn was a HUGE bunch of apples stacked up in a corner, reaching all the way to the roof! (There was easily over 500 apples stored there!)
"SSSSo many..." Maud Bat said.
"SSSSo colourful..." Flutterbat said.
"SSSSo red...." Maud Bat added.
"SSSSo juicy!" FlutterBat said, and started to fly towards the apple pile when Maud Bat took a bite into her tail and dragged her so hard that the yellow Bat Pony was sent right into the doors behind them!
"Ouch! What wassss that for?!" Flutterbat asked as she got up from her unexpected fly trip into the door.
"You tried to have all of the applesssss for yourssssself." Maud Bat said.
"Nnnnnnnno..." Flutterbat said while trying to not look Maud Bat directly in the eyes, only making her lying even more obvious.
"You choosssse the wrong Bat Pony to messssss with!" Maud Bat said, and started to attack her Bat friend!
Flutterbat was quick to realise that getting into contact with the living Bulldozer that was heading towards her was a bad idea, and she decided to make her way back into the air again. (And this time make sure to not let Maud Bat get a bite out of her tail.)
While in the air the yellow Bat Pony was circling around the fat grounded one, and waited for the right moment to attack her!
While not showing it Maud Bat was a little bit worried over what to do next, since she couldn't use her own wings to get into the air they where simply a huge obstacle to her. Just getting in the way, and blocking her every move...
"I think I've jussst found a way to usssse thessse." Maud said, and gave a little smirk as she knew Flutterbat would not see it coming.
When she thought that her opponent was not paying any attention Flutterbat came charging down towards her!...only to suddenly get a big SMACK to the side!
What she hadn't planned on was that instead of flying with them Maud Bat had used her wings as a way of counter attacking Flutterbat! (Giving her a real hard slap to send her tumbling to the side.)
She was about to get up when suddenly she felt something really heavy sit down onto her! And before even looking up she could easily guess that the very heavy thing was indeed Maud Bat.
While having Flutterbat trapped under her weight Maud Bat could easily end her opponent now and take the prize for herself, but that's when something bigger then her mind started talking.
GROWL!!!
It was her big belly, that had grown really hungry thanks to all that fighting frim before. (And even when being pinned under that growling beast Flutterbat herself could also feel her stomach getting pretty hungry.)
"What do you sssay? SSSShall we ssssstop thissss, and insssstead focusssss on the applessss?" Maud Bat asked Flutterbat, who replied "I think that would be the bessst."
And with that Maud Bat let what was first her best friend, to later arch rival, and then finally back to best friend again, back up and together they decided to head for the huge apple stack.
It was a feast like no other for the two Bat Ponies as the apple juices was just like blood to them, and the seemingly never ending stream of it was filling them up nicely.
For someone seeing it from the start would have guessed that Maud easily would be the bat to have the body to take in much more then her partner, but she had been having that huge cake earlier from the day before she had been transformed, and that wasn't completely digested yet.
So it was actually Fluttershy that was the bat who became the biggest consumer of the apple juices, as her lack of wearing any clothes at all (Her friend Maud was wearing a full body covering dress.) meant that her body had much more room to expand.
For every 2-3 apples that Maud Bat ate Flutterbat easily took down twice as many! (Making even Maud herself surprised on the level of hunger that this Bat Pony showed.)
And to not leave a mess of mushy apples in the barn the two Bat Ponies took and tossed every one that they drained out of the barn window. (Leaving them to be taken away by any other forest critters that could be out and running through the farm during the night.)
Once all the apples had been eaten the two Bats sat down and rested next to each other.
While Maud looking full after eating so much was no surprise, it was very amazing to see that the otherwise thin Fluttershy had now not only got a bit overweight, but actually up to the same level as her friend now in her Bat shape was truly something not of the ordinary!
As they just sat down and let all those apple juices shake and bubble inside of them, one of them couldn't keep it all inside.
"BUUUUUUUURRRRPPPPP!!!!" Flutterbat said as she burped/roared out almost all of her extra air that she had been storing inside of her belly!
This had in return woken up a certain friend of her that was in charge of running the farm.
As Applejack heard the noise she instantly went down to check out her apples in the barn (As often many creatures would try to steal some of them when they had been collecting a lot.), and found it empty on apple but instead filled with two very big Bat Ponies.
"What in Tarnation?!" She said over seeing this...
(End it with Applejack saying "What in Tarnation?!", and then say that if they want to know what happen next in the story they will have to look at Monterang's image.)
Monterrang where I made a story and he did a couple of images to it.In it his fat version of Maud Pie is doing Fluttershy company as they walk through the Everfree Forest at nigh, when suddenly a darker side of Fluttershy makes herself present again!
In this link you will find both the image that is in my thumbnail AND an image of what happens after the end of my story. (So make sure to finish reading my story first before you click it so you wont be confused on what's going on. )
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18111275/
Follow Monterrang's Fat Maud on her own Tumblr Blog.
http://askfatmaudpie.tumblr.com/
Maud Pie and Fluttershy is from My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, and belongs to Hasbro Studios.
Happy Halloween Everybody!
It was during a dark and windy October night where Fluttershy and Maud Pie (Pinkie's fat sister) found themselves wandering through the infamously dangerous Everfree Forest!
Maud had been coming over for a short visit to her sister, where Pinkie had been throwing yet another to celebrate their ever growing friendship. (And Maud's ever growing stomach, as she ate almost all of the cake that Pinkie had baked!)
After the party all the ponies where heading back home, and Fluttershy had been giving Maud the generous offer to let her sleep over at her cottage.
On their way Fluttershy said that she knew about a "short cut" they could take, and that had now lead them completely lost instead!
"So...You knew about a short cut?" Maud said after being quiet for most of their journey, making Fluttershy confused on if she was trying to ask her that in a rhetorical way. (As Maud always had that exact way of speaking.)
"Yes I did. But I didn't count on it to be so dark out here. That makes it a little harder to know how everything looks like." Fluttershy answered.
"But we are in October now. Shouldn't you know that it will get darker much more quick now?" Maud asked, once again making Fluttershy unsure if she is mocking her behind her back or not.
"I was just hoping for something to..."light it up" a little bit." Fluttershy said, as she was actually starting to get a little annoyed now. "Just something simple like Fireflies, Glowing Moss, or...Oh No!" She suddenly said.
Looking up the yellow Pegasus could see the full moon appearing from behind the clouds, and it was starting to mess with her mind. (And body!)
She let out what sounded like a high pitched blip as fangs grew out of her mouth, her ears got more pointy, and her wings transformed from her normal feathery ones to ones made of skin!
She had become Flutterbat once again!
Maud was just about to ask what had just happen to her friend, when said friend took and dug her fangs into her neck!
"YEOOOOOSH!!!!" Maud shouted loudly! (For once breaking her monotone voice that she otherwise where known for.)
The fat mare felt very dizzy as the vampire pony let go off her neck, and how changes started to happen to her as well.
Just like with her friend Fluttershy she got Fangs and pointy Ears, but she could also feel something build up under her dress. And before she knew it she felt how two holes got ripped up, and suddenly she was sporting wings as well!
Feeling her new wings flap a few times Maud Bat looked over at Flutterbat, who said "How doesss it feel?"
"SSSSSurprissssingly good." Maud Bat said, noticing that the fangs made her hold on to her S's when she was speaking.
There was then a bit of a silence between the two until Maud Bat asked "SSSo what sssshall we do now?"
"We'll eat!" Flutterbat said, and Maud Bat was about to say something when her fat belly spoke for her.
GROWL!!!
"I could usssse ssssome more mealsssss." Maud Bat said, while rubbing her belly with one of her new found wings.
"Exccccellent! I know jussst the placccessss for ussss to go to. Follow me!" Flutterbat said, and lifted herself off the ground with her wings.
Maud tried to do the same thing, but her added weight made it impossible for her to lift, so she decided to just follow her fellow vampire pony on foot instead.
After following Flutterbat's nose for some time both Vampire Ponies found themselves in some familiar territory.
The Apple Family's Apple Farm!
For Flutterbat who had done this before this was like a buffet of sweets for her to consume, but Maud was still a little bit lost on this whole "Being a Vampire pony" thing, so she asked "Why did you take ussss here?"
"To feassst of coursssse!" Flutterbat said before she flied pass a few trees, and came back holding a small bunch of apples in her hooves.
"Try one." She said and handed on over to Maud Bat, who in return refused her offer and said "I'm more into rockssss."
"Oh, but I can garantee that you will find thissss much more appealing to your tasssste budssss." Flutterbat said and once again forced the apple onto her friend. (This time letting go of it herself so that Maud had to hold it.)
"Fine. I'll taste it then." Maud Bat sighed and then put her new fangs into the red fruit.
The taste of the apple was really amazing! The sweet and sugary juices of the fruit had been pretty okay for Maud before when she was just a pony, but as this "Bat thing" she was now it tasted like the most wonderful and addicted treat of her life! (Even more then Candy Rocks!)
Even though inside of her, her body just wanted to shout out how delicious and great this is, all that came out of her mouth was a blank "It tastesssss good."
"Sssso what will we do now?" Maud Bat asked after finishing her one apple. "Sssshall we jusssst eat the resssst of the applessss on the farm?"
"No. To easssy." Flutterbat said, and started to sniff the air again until she got the catch of something.
"Oh yessss! I can feel how they have sssstored the besssst applesssss in the barn! Applessss that have no bugssss crawling over them, not being sssssour, nor rotten! Applessss that have been wassshed and are ready for sssselling tomorrow!" Flutterbat said, rambling so that saliva was starting to drip from her fangs!
Maud Bat was just standing behind her and listen, and when she was finished the fat Bat Pony asked "Can your nose really smell all that?", to which Flutterbat answered back a proud "Yessss!"
Flutterbat lead her partner towards the big barn on the apple farm, and as they got closer even Maud Bat started to feel the smell of the special selected apples.
Once outside Flutterbat open up the big barn doors, and then closed them once they both where inside.
Thanks to their new changes as Bat Ponies they could both see in the dark, and what they saw got their jaws dropping in amazement.
Inside the barn was a HUGE bunch of apples stacked up in a corner, reaching all the way to the roof! (There was easily over 500 apples stored there!)
"SSSSo many..." Maud Bat said.
"SSSSo colourful..." Flutterbat said.
"SSSSo red...." Maud Bat added.
"SSSSo juicy!" FlutterBat said, and started to fly towards the apple pile when Maud Bat took a bite into her tail and dragged her so hard that the yellow Bat Pony was sent right into the doors behind them!
"Ouch! What wassss that for?!" Flutterbat asked as she got up from her unexpected fly trip into the door.
"You tried to have all of the applesssss for yourssssself." Maud Bat said.
"Nnnnnnnno..." Flutterbat said while trying to not look Maud Bat directly in the eyes, only making her lying even more obvious.
"You choosssse the wrong Bat Pony to messssss with!" Maud Bat said, and started to attack her Bat friend!
Flutterbat was quick to realise that getting into contact with the living Bulldozer that was heading towards her was a bad idea, and she decided to make her way back into the air again. (And this time make sure to not let Maud Bat get a bite out of her tail.)
While in the air the yellow Bat Pony was circling around the fat grounded one, and waited for the right moment to attack her!
While not showing it Maud Bat was a little bit worried over what to do next, since she couldn't use her own wings to get into the air they where simply a huge obstacle to her. Just getting in the way, and blocking her every move...
"I think I've jussst found a way to usssse thessse." Maud said, and gave a little smirk as she knew Flutterbat would not see it coming.
When she thought that her opponent was not paying any attention Flutterbat came charging down towards her!...only to suddenly get a big SMACK to the side!
What she hadn't planned on was that instead of flying with them Maud Bat had used her wings as a way of counter attacking Flutterbat! (Giving her a real hard slap to send her tumbling to the side.)
She was about to get up when suddenly she felt something really heavy sit down onto her! And before even looking up she could easily guess that the very heavy thing was indeed Maud Bat.
While having Flutterbat trapped under her weight Maud Bat could easily end her opponent now and take the prize for herself, but that's when something bigger then her mind started talking.
GROWL!!!
It was her big belly, that had grown really hungry thanks to all that fighting frim before. (And even when being pinned under that growling beast Flutterbat herself could also feel her stomach getting pretty hungry.)
"What do you sssay? SSSShall we ssssstop thissss, and insssstead focusssss on the applessss?" Maud Bat asked Flutterbat, who replied "I think that would be the bessst."
And with that Maud Bat let what was first her best friend, to later arch rival, and then finally back to best friend again, back up and together they decided to head for the huge apple stack.
It was a feast like no other for the two Bat Ponies as the apple juices was just like blood to them, and the seemingly never ending stream of it was filling them up nicely.
For someone seeing it from the start would have guessed that Maud easily would be the bat to have the body to take in much more then her partner, but she had been having that huge cake earlier from the day before she had been transformed, and that wasn't completely digested yet.
So it was actually Fluttershy that was the bat who became the biggest consumer of the apple juices, as her lack of wearing any clothes at all (Her friend Maud was wearing a full body covering dress.) meant that her body had much more room to expand.
For every 2-3 apples that Maud Bat ate Flutterbat easily took down twice as many! (Making even Maud herself surprised on the level of hunger that this Bat Pony showed.)
And to not leave a mess of mushy apples in the barn the two Bat Ponies took and tossed every one that they drained out of the barn window. (Leaving them to be taken away by any other forest critters that could be out and running through the farm during the night.)
Once all the apples had been eaten the two Bats sat down and rested next to each other.
While Maud looking full after eating so much was no surprise, it was very amazing to see that the otherwise thin Fluttershy had now not only got a bit overweight, but actually up to the same level as her friend now in her Bat shape was truly something not of the ordinary!
As they just sat down and let all those apple juices shake and bubble inside of them, one of them couldn't keep it all inside.
"BUUUUUUUURRRRPPPPP!!!!" Flutterbat said as she burped/roared out almost all of her extra air that she had been storing inside of her belly!
This had in return woken up a certain friend of her that was in charge of running the farm.
As Applejack heard the noise she instantly went down to check out her apples in the barn (As often many creatures would try to steal some of them when they had been collecting a lot.), and found it empty on apple but instead filled with two very big Bat Ponies.
"What in Tarnation?!" She said over seeing this...
(End it with Applejack saying "What in Tarnation?!", and then say that if they want to know what happen next in the story they will have to look at Monterang's image.)
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