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.... Dedicated to all boyfriends or girlfriends out there who have been in the bad end of a relationship, and to thouse who have harmed them.
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This is a message to all who have been in this kind of relationship. It is your choice whether or not you read this, but I encourage it.
Now, I'm no professional, but I strongly believe that a woman does not deserve the unfair and harsh treatment most males deliver, all for the sole fact that they are woman. You know what I think? I think the male is the inferior gender. Pride, Sloth, Rage, Greed, Lust, Envy, and Gluttony. Males exhibit these sins almost all the time. It is, in this world and this time, rare to find a male who is true to his word and doesn't easily fold under the temptation of sins.
Now, I won't brag, and I won't say I've never folded under the pressure of sin, but I don't easily fold under it. I've felt Rage, I've burned with Lust, I've pigged out on Gluttony, I've been Jealous, and I know damn well I've been Lazy.
However, I will never, in my life, harm a woman because she's a woman, or because of what she believes.
The fact that males almost never try to hold back the temptation is the reason why so many hearts are shattered and broken so easily.
I also wont say that women are not susceptible to the sins, but they put up a better fight against the sins then the males do, and that tells me that they are better then us. Sure, we're stronger, but most males use their strength for horrible things that I do not wish to describe, for fear of children reading this.
Please, if you start a relationship with someone, don't start it because you think the person LOOKS great. Start it because you have genuine feeling for them. That almost always has the best outcome.
Now, I'm no professional, but I strongly believe that a woman does not deserve the unfair and harsh treatment most males deliver, all for the sole fact that they are woman. You know what I think? I think the male is the inferior gender. Pride, Sloth, Rage, Greed, Lust, Envy, and Gluttony. Males exhibit these sins almost all the time. It is, in this world and this time, rare to find a male who is true to his word and doesn't easily fold under the temptation of sins.
Now, I won't brag, and I won't say I've never folded under the pressure of sin, but I don't easily fold under it. I've felt Rage, I've burned with Lust, I've pigged out on Gluttony, I've been Jealous, and I know damn well I've been Lazy.
However, I will never, in my life, harm a woman because she's a woman, or because of what she believes.
The fact that males almost never try to hold back the temptation is the reason why so many hearts are shattered and broken so easily.
I also wont say that women are not susceptible to the sins, but they put up a better fight against the sins then the males do, and that tells me that they are better then us. Sure, we're stronger, but most males use their strength for horrible things that I do not wish to describe, for fear of children reading this.
Please, if you start a relationship with someone, don't start it because you think the person LOOKS great. Start it because you have genuine feeling for them. That almost always has the best outcome.
I do fucking agree, sorry for the "bad word", but i really i agree, and i think like that, however you are better than me , because you said that, and that is fucking true and they must be respected, and that's for sure that womans are greater than man, and love is not for sex, or this kinda of thing, love, as i do think, is a feeling, that makes you like the person, for what she is, for what she make you feel, for being a friend, or someone you want to protect, not to have or this kinda of thing, someone to you just like, and must be respected!
That's true that sometimes it is hard to understand, cause what this fucking society made us believe in this things, somehow we must see, that the mans are nothing if you look a woman, even if she is a "boring" woman, or any "girl" of todays, she is better than man, just what she is because we managed to make she learn that in her life, and i say "WE" because however you are, we make a society, i am sorry if you are someone who try to make people see "truth", this is what we have become, and if there wasn't the womans, the oposite sex, we were nothing, every good man that we see, faced this at least once, that the woman is better than man.
I dunno if i am being reasonable, if i am being right, that is part what i think, and i think that is what it really matters, something, that i do think, diferent from what people may think, but i think that are how the things are, sorry for using "bad words" again, because i just though i had to use, for my kind of person, for who i am, for what i think, for where we live, for what we may trust, for things that we like, for people that we give our heart without doubt, that we miss when they are not there, that make us humans, that managed to resist the fucking world of today.
Forgive me for any english mistake, i am still learning, and i think this is what i think about this, and great poem you made, it explain many things, even that words can't say, as simple it is.
That's true that sometimes it is hard to understand, cause what this fucking society made us believe in this things, somehow we must see, that the mans are nothing if you look a woman, even if she is a "boring" woman, or any "girl" of todays, she is better than man, just what she is because we managed to make she learn that in her life, and i say "WE" because however you are, we make a society, i am sorry if you are someone who try to make people see "truth", this is what we have become, and if there wasn't the womans, the oposite sex, we were nothing, every good man that we see, faced this at least once, that the woman is better than man.
I dunno if i am being reasonable, if i am being right, that is part what i think, and i think that is what it really matters, something, that i do think, diferent from what people may think, but i think that are how the things are, sorry for using "bad words" again, because i just though i had to use, for my kind of person, for who i am, for what i think, for where we live, for what we may trust, for things that we like, for people that we give our heart without doubt, that we miss when they are not there, that make us humans, that managed to resist the fucking world of today.
Forgive me for any english mistake, i am still learning, and i think this is what i think about this, and great poem you made, it explain many things, even that words can't say, as simple it is.
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