This is just a test to see if that story I'm writing is getting some interest from anyone else than the one I shown it to. Trust me the thing is really big and I just posted the start of it to see if the thing can be shown some interest. Of course, if you don't like Pokemon or even reading, skip this one.
Eric was a young boy still living with his parents in Newsoundsburgh when, during a heavy pouring rain that lasted for days, he found an uncommon colored sick Ralts in the Forest one day close to his house that was just next to the pokeball factory where all type of pokeball were made. Eric loved pokemon of all kind and couldn’t see one hurt like that Ralts was. He picked it up and saw already the poor little thing was burning up. Without hesitation he rushed with it to the nearest Pokemon Center, arrived there he rushed into the Center and yelled at Nurse Joy to help that Ralts as it was obviously burning up. Joy took it and brought it straight into the Backroom. Eric stayed in front of the Door for hours until Nurse Joy came out with the fresh Ralts on the stretcher. Nurse Joy then told Eric that his Ralts is now in perfect condition but that he shouldn’t kept him out in the heavy rain like that. Eric told Nurse Joy that Ralts wasn’t his pokemon but that he found it burning up in the Forest close to his house and brought it right away. Nurse Joy then looked at Ralts and understood before saying back that this Ralts was then the one and only “Rebellious” Pokemon from the Forest; A trainer-less pokemon that for a mysterious reason stayed in that forest waiting for something or someone... Ralts as it heard that looked at Eric’s eyes and jumped at his neck. Startling Eric and Nurse Joy at the same time. Nurse Joy then added: “Well, guess it was waiting for someone and it found it now.”
Eric was surprised at that phrase Nurse Joy said and looked at that Ralts having it’s small arms around his neck like it wanted to hug him. He said to the cute little Ralts if it accepted to become his pokemon.. the little Ralts only answered by squeezing itself tighter against Eric as it nearly yelled a small “Ralts” as it did. Eric then added a “Guess that means yes.” Turning to Nurse Joy he then asked about detail on that particular Ralts. Nurse Joy told that she would be happy to check those with him and asked Eric if he wanted to come look at her tests. Eric accepted the invitation and entered the backdoor from where Nurse Joy came out with Ralts on the stretcher minutes ago.
Inside, Eric was lead by Nurse Joy to a room with a big apparatus that was used to scan every little detail of the pokemon it was put on. Nurse Joy invited Eric to put Ralts in place, which he did before joining Nurse Joy behind another door. After some instants Nurse looked at the screen and looked at all the details. She printed it and shown it to Eric. Eric took the paper and read it:
RALTS
Species: Feeling Pokemon
Type: Psychic / Fairy
Gender: ♀Female
Height: 1’4” Weight: 14.6 lbs
Level: 19
Known Move:
- Disabling Voice
- Lucky Chant
- Magical Leaf
- Heal Pulse
Stats:
HP: 49
Atk: 36
Def: 30
Sp.Atk: 70
Sp. Def: 60
Spd: 55
Ability: Telepathy
Eric reread it numerous times, all was okay, but that “Telepathy” ... The thing was so rare he couldn’t believe it... Eric turned himself toward Nurse Joy and asked if it had to do with the fact that his Ralts was light blue instead of the normal green Ralts was normally. Nurse Joy told that indeed it was rare to see a Ralts with Telepathy as an ability but that the color had nothing to do with it. As she saw another one a couple of months ago with the same ability but it was green like Ralts were normally. But the color wasn’t a illness in itself, and that Ralts would be a great pokemon.
Eric thanked Nurse Joy as he came back in the room where he left is new companion earlier. Grabbed it gently from the table and brought it home to show to his parents. Arrived at home Eric showed the cute little Ralts to his parents and announced that he wanted to raise it. Eric’s parents already wanted to give him his first pokemon for a moment now already but didn’t know which one to give him. Eric arriving with this Ralts resolved the problem. They accepted him to raise that Ralts but warned Eric that from now on he was responsible for it, that he needed to feed it when it was hungry and bring it to the pokemon center when it was feeling sick. Eric already knew that and was more than ready to even use his allowance to pay for Ralts’s food.
Eric was a young boy still living with his parents in Newsoundsburgh when, during a heavy pouring rain that lasted for days, he found an uncommon colored sick Ralts in the Forest one day close to his house that was just next to the pokeball factory where all type of pokeball were made. Eric loved pokemon of all kind and couldn’t see one hurt like that Ralts was. He picked it up and saw already the poor little thing was burning up. Without hesitation he rushed with it to the nearest Pokemon Center, arrived there he rushed into the Center and yelled at Nurse Joy to help that Ralts as it was obviously burning up. Joy took it and brought it straight into the Backroom. Eric stayed in front of the Door for hours until Nurse Joy came out with the fresh Ralts on the stretcher. Nurse Joy then told Eric that his Ralts is now in perfect condition but that he shouldn’t kept him out in the heavy rain like that. Eric told Nurse Joy that Ralts wasn’t his pokemon but that he found it burning up in the Forest close to his house and brought it right away. Nurse Joy then looked at Ralts and understood before saying back that this Ralts was then the one and only “Rebellious” Pokemon from the Forest; A trainer-less pokemon that for a mysterious reason stayed in that forest waiting for something or someone... Ralts as it heard that looked at Eric’s eyes and jumped at his neck. Startling Eric and Nurse Joy at the same time. Nurse Joy then added: “Well, guess it was waiting for someone and it found it now.”
Eric was surprised at that phrase Nurse Joy said and looked at that Ralts having it’s small arms around his neck like it wanted to hug him. He said to the cute little Ralts if it accepted to become his pokemon.. the little Ralts only answered by squeezing itself tighter against Eric as it nearly yelled a small “Ralts” as it did. Eric then added a “Guess that means yes.” Turning to Nurse Joy he then asked about detail on that particular Ralts. Nurse Joy told that she would be happy to check those with him and asked Eric if he wanted to come look at her tests. Eric accepted the invitation and entered the backdoor from where Nurse Joy came out with Ralts on the stretcher minutes ago.
Inside, Eric was lead by Nurse Joy to a room with a big apparatus that was used to scan every little detail of the pokemon it was put on. Nurse Joy invited Eric to put Ralts in place, which he did before joining Nurse Joy behind another door. After some instants Nurse looked at the screen and looked at all the details. She printed it and shown it to Eric. Eric took the paper and read it:
RALTS
Species: Feeling Pokemon
Type: Psychic / Fairy
Gender: ♀Female
Height: 1’4” Weight: 14.6 lbs
Level: 19
Known Move:
- Disabling Voice
- Lucky Chant
- Magical Leaf
- Heal Pulse
Stats:
HP: 49
Atk: 36
Def: 30
Sp.Atk: 70
Sp. Def: 60
Spd: 55
Ability: Telepathy
Eric reread it numerous times, all was okay, but that “Telepathy” ... The thing was so rare he couldn’t believe it... Eric turned himself toward Nurse Joy and asked if it had to do with the fact that his Ralts was light blue instead of the normal green Ralts was normally. Nurse Joy told that indeed it was rare to see a Ralts with Telepathy as an ability but that the color had nothing to do with it. As she saw another one a couple of months ago with the same ability but it was green like Ralts were normally. But the color wasn’t a illness in itself, and that Ralts would be a great pokemon.
Eric thanked Nurse Joy as he came back in the room where he left is new companion earlier. Grabbed it gently from the table and brought it home to show to his parents. Arrived at home Eric showed the cute little Ralts to his parents and announced that he wanted to raise it. Eric’s parents already wanted to give him his first pokemon for a moment now already but didn’t know which one to give him. Eric arriving with this Ralts resolved the problem. They accepted him to raise that Ralts but warned Eric that from now on he was responsible for it, that he needed to feed it when it was hungry and bring it to the pokemon center when it was feeling sick. Eric already knew that and was more than ready to even use his allowance to pay for Ralts’s food.
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