I liked it quite a bit. And the she wolf was a pretty solid, interesting character.
But I hate open endings, lol. Where's my closure?? >:)

the She-wolf's a solid character? hahah not something I was expecting. she is directly mentioned twice. how ever if you say that then that's great. to be honest I don't really know who she is, but she must be strong for GM to fear her.

your closure? well... do you think Elock has what it takes to out wit a God of manipulation? GM clearly had not expect the She-wolf to show up. but how could she help our little Kobold win not just one, but multiple games, with out losing himself.

sadly this is not a story for closure. but I'm happy to hear how you think it will end.

hmm, I think I'll have to use the She-wolf and GM again. at lest get a picture of her

I say buzzwords to encourage authors to write more. >:) *sinister laugh*
To be honest though, the story was so short that even the smallest roles added up as feeling like a significant building block. Fast pace almost made it feel like it were a draft for a larger work. That is my honest critique, it could have used some "moar longer" :p

I should probably try to break the habit of assuming the main heroes always win, lol. In this case, I'm not sure. Was kind of leaning towards Elock. In a lot of fantasy stories, characters are able to overcome trial after trial in a row, so I wouldn't be completely astonished if that happened.

You only have two submissions up?

I had to keep the word count to a limit, for uni.

Sadly this is not always the case, are you familiar with tabletop games? (DnD, pathfinder) at lest in the early levels it is very easy for your avatar to die, I've had it nearly happen several times to mine own. This story draws from that and other games, chest and two card games.

perhaps it could be expanded, honestly not sure what to add, I guess the travel there, let people get attached to other members of the guild. as for the she wolf I doubt she'd get any more parts, perhaps another dream.

I presume you mean two stories. before uni I started a lot of stories, sometimes not at the start, however these are the only ones to be completed. I think... no wait there is another somewhere, as a draft.. maybe I should dig that up. eh it's not that good though.

going on wards I should be writing more. and I like to make scenes for pictures when I upload them, though that's a recent habit

I suppose I do know about dying all too well from StoneSoup. ;|

Yep, I checked your gal and only saw two categorized under stories. I do think you should keep writing. :P
Most clean fics bore the hell out of me, but I actually finished yours wanting a little more. That is rare, if it makes any difference in your decision. (Yes, hmhmhmhm. Let me run your life!)

Pics with stories is good. Adds more work, sure, but for lazy folks, it's almost a necessity for the bland imagination.

I plan to work as a writer at some point hahah, rest assured this wont be the last

oh d thank you, that means alot.