Oh my gosh, this is absolutely fantastic! Critique wise, the coloring is...blurred...? I'm not sure how to say it, but it just kinda looks a bit messy. I guess undefined is how to best describe it. The blood looks absolutely gorgeous until we have the dripping, which needs a lot of work in terms of detail. I'm assuming you just dragged your mouse/pen down to make it, and it really doesn't look great. So more time spent into making the lines of blood dripping from the maw would add a lot to the picture. All in all though, it looks great, do keep it up!

Thank you!!! I'll be sure to practice drawing different liquids and how they drip/run, and try to clear-up and make my colouring more purposeful~! It's really great having another pair of eyes to catch the mistakes I didn't see!!