Loved this! Gainer cults are something that need to be explored more. ;)

I totally agree! It's pretty fun to write about as well. A whole group of people fervently devoted to feeding someone absolutely enormous? Yes please.

This was absolutely lovely.

Aw, thank you! ^_^

This was a great read! It's amazing ^w^

Thank you! My little experiment with plot seemed to has paid off. ^_^

Oh wow, you put yourself in the story! Judging you o.o

But seriously, it was a great read! Hope to see from ya soon.

Aak! No judging! No judging!!

But really, thanks. ^_^ I hope so too!

Yes! Good catch! I've updated it.

Amazing! Although I believe there are still some mysteries of this town... :)

Maybe I can write a sequel, where a couple of mystery-solving youngsters try to solve the mystery of the missing cheesecake.. but I think it might be kinda straight forward.

I'm not gonna pretend like this wasn't a mind-numbingly good read, but at "Praise be to the lard" I kinda had to...take a breath...

Also, "Eventually he had condescended to apply for some more menial jobs,..."
I think you meant conceded there.

But like I said, this story made me feel good all over. Good work!!

Haha. I tried to resist writing that, I really did!! But when you're in the middle of the church of a gainer cult and they're about to pray.. I couldn't stop myself. Puns and food are my only weaknesses. If it helps, you have my most heartfelt apologies. And at least I didn't write "May pieces of cake be with you."

I meant to write condescended there, as in 'He lowered his dignity to the point of applying to menial jobs, when he really felt he deserved a cushy desk job' but admittedly the phrasing is a little bit awkward.

I'm glad you liked most of it though. ^_^

Huff, excellent writing as always. Love the happy ending for the mayor as everyone essentially worships him. I'm sure the gainer cult will take care of his every need.

They absolutely adore his enormous, hungry self. So much so that I'm kinda half-thinking about a sequel --the mental image of this hungry tub of lard surrounded by a hundred men and women all clamoring to press their bodies into his fat and shove food into his face.. paws and arms and chub everywhere with a mayor so overwhelmed with food, love, fat and touch that all he can do is just accept it. Something like that. Anyway, the whole premise was a very hot idea. ^_^

Yeah that is a pretty hot idea. I think you should totally go for it. The mayor should be officially greeted by his adoring cult formally after all. ;3

CONTENT WARNING: DEMOCRACY


OOOH BABY THIS IS GONNA BE A HOT ONE

If you don't masturbate to this story, you're basically a communist.

It was a very entertaining and fun read, though I would've loved the story putting more emphasis on his final fat stage, it felt like it was over so fast - could've used some more description, jiggling and all around fat mayor!

But that is highly subjective and is most likely just me being overly greedy. As mentioned already, I liked it quite a lot and am always glad when I see that pink story thumbnail heralding delightfully decadent anthro messes.

Praise the lard.

I do kind of agree with you, in that there could have been more of the good stuff in there. Part of me wanted to go back and add a few more scenes as he's growing, but it had already gotten really long and I was admittedly aiming for storyline progression over like real, proper fat scenes here. It works well in the beginning, and I even think I got the flavor of the hedonism and dedication to growth through, but I know it's way more fun when the writer lingers on certain things, focusing more on the minutia and descriptions of actually begin huge rather than what's necessarily going to move the story forward.

I will have to remember that for next time. I really appreciate the feedback. ^_^

Absolutely incredible. 11/10

Your math may be dodgy, but that doesn't make me like you any less. ^_^ Thanks!

Great read! I had two nice... sessions with it.

I think it could have more evenly incorporated more descriptions on his proportions and other details about his fat (how out of shape he is, his fat body interacting with the environment, etc.), accenting the more plot-heavy segments and going a little more in-depth on his body for each stage of growth. Especially, public praise/examination, all the different environments he enters, seems a ripe platform for that sort of detail. Like in the bar--how much does his ass eclipse the stool? Is his belly interacting with the counter?

And I know you're not a numbers kinda guy when it comes to porn (and I like that), but with all the chairs, desks, and etc., some measurements (even without numbers, relative to objects) on those woulda been helpful. Like, the top of the float was extended, but we don't know the original nor extended size, both related to nothing. Is the vehicle a sedan, a truck? yadda yadda

(I know that's a lot but I really liked the story and how you write! I'm always checking my submissions here hoping for more Mairari )

First off, you're welcome -_^

Like I said to Syriko, I think you're totally right. In all stories I write, the beginning always tends to be "Move the plot forward to get to the good stuff". In this case, I think because the main body of the story was actually not necessarily gaining-related and was somewhat more complex than what I normally write, I never really left that headspace. The bar actually would have been a perfect place to do this, because it was kind of an isolated pocket of setting where he's definitely fat for the first time in the story. Reading it back, I have it a little bit, but I could have easily lengthened it into something better. I guess even at 11,000 words it feels rushed in areas.

In any case, thank you for taking the time to write that out. ^_^ As much as I love compliments, I really do want to get better, and this helps!

I love fat guys of all sizes, especially when they're getting fatter, but you're right in that I do sometimes get a little carried away with the really big side of things. I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

I agree with you Mai.

Worth it to visit town Granby to live there only to stay fat not fit.

Wow, that was a whale of a story. Well done man.

I loved reading this! I've had a couple nice 'hand exercises' with this. Thanks for that!

But honeslty I really liked the progression of the story and North's inner confilct of growing or losing weight. You never see a weight gain story with this happening. It was a nice change. Also how North had proper charcter progression, as he was a muscle dude and ended with being a blimp.

The social aspect of this story is interesting. Basically sacrificing yourself for eveyone else to be happy. I would've liked the cult part of this fleshed out some more. I felt that didn't add or take away from the story. It was just there.

The charcters were pretty good and humerous. North was basically a fat maniacal blimp at the end. I like evil fat guys, I just like big bellied men in general.

Overall this story is solid. Great work!