Interesting, if a bit bare and rushed.

bones of an interesting tale there. I would love to see this again one day should you ever choose to flesh it out and expand. wonderful snapshot. *hugs*

*Hugs* thank you. That's mostly what I wanted to do and what struck me was get the skeleton built at least. I intend to tell more about Yuri.

Interesting little piece. I suppose there's much more to these characters, but all of it is just inside your head. And yeah, bombs. I don't know great amount about explosives, but what little I can remember from chemistry from university, you can do everything right with a bomb, and it can still kill you. Chemicals create new compounds because of change of temperature or because of moisture, or because they touch a metal, or whatever. So, a bomb built by an amateur is just as dangerous, or even more dangerous, than a bomb built by a trained and experienced professional.

Well written. Short, but enjoyable. Good work.

OK... I wanted more and that's a good sign - so where is it?

*places paws on hips and gives the look...

V.

It's coming ^_^

Good...

V.

Thank you very much for reading and for you critique, it's much appreciated.