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*looks up from her tangle of bows, shredded wrapping paper, and scotch tape.
Yes, yes, yes... I was hoping to have this wrapped up by now, but the further I go, the deeper I have found it to be. Nothing is ever as simple as it seems.
This is not my doing, as what is written is never mapped out in advance... the characters tell the story and I simply follow their lead.
This is part 4 - part five (the conclusion) should be finished just after the first of the new year.
For those of you who patiently wait - I patiently write.
Vixyy
Yes, yes, yes... I was hoping to have this wrapped up by now, but the further I go, the deeper I have found it to be. Nothing is ever as simple as it seems.
This is not my doing, as what is written is never mapped out in advance... the characters tell the story and I simply follow their lead.
This is part 4 - part five (the conclusion) should be finished just after the first of the new year.
For those of you who patiently wait - I patiently write.
Vixyy
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Very good chapter, in a way. This has more action than the previous one, and it is a longer one, as well. Although the incidents in Whackadoodle Inn are rather humorous, I still was more intrigued by the discussion of the Skunks and the Hounds, and how the book is again viewed as a medium between the two world, maybe for the good doctor's frustration, but I think the book is the key to solve the whole mess.
I also liked the characterization of Hazel and Horace Hound, both characters seem very strong, vivid, and their dialect helps to picture them out. Especially Hazel is very personal, and I liked the way she and her husband interacted in this chapter.
Good work, I have to say, I enjoyed reading this, I am waiting for the next chapter.
I also liked the characterization of Hazel and Horace Hound, both characters seem very strong, vivid, and their dialect helps to picture them out. Especially Hazel is very personal, and I liked the way she and her husband interacted in this chapter.
Good work, I have to say, I enjoyed reading this, I am waiting for the next chapter.
Nice way to subtly up the ante on the suspense at the end there. Only glitch is on page nine where Charlie waits on Miss Vixyy as the narration explains moonrooms. Seems to be Charlie bit of narration but if he’s from another world he would be familiar with them. Kind of pulled me out of the story a bit but that’s just me always looking for clues on every level as I’m reading.
I truly love the sense of humor you give your characters. It's able to get real laughter out of me. And even though it can be a bit prickly or 'adult', no one's hurt by the jokes and pranks played. There may be a grumble or a frown, but eventually all's forgiven. That's one of the things I like so much about your characters. They all act like family, regardless of whether or not they are related. Everyone cares about the feelings of others enough to have fun without harm.
*sighs*
Lovely work again, Ma'am. Heading for the conclusion, then a bit of shopping.
*sighs*
Lovely work again, Ma'am. Heading for the conclusion, then a bit of shopping.
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