Just the first two scenes of my Digimon fanfic. Critiques welcome.
Category Story / Digimon
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 76px
File Size 16 kB
I like the first part, definitely... I saw ya got 'Razor Wind' in brackets, though. Ya lookin' for a translation of those words? *used that phrase in an uber-old fic of his, where he needed the translation* When I asked a friend of mine to translate Razor Wind, it came out as 'Kamesori Kazi' or something like that.
Do I need to mention I literally throw my digimon Kuro atcha? XD Now that he's got at least two forms more, he's ready for use!
Do I need to mention I literally throw my digimon Kuro atcha? XD Now that he's got at least two forms more, he's ready for use!
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