
Hey, a thing I actually did some work on!
This is an attempt at coloring a sketch that
bodbloat so graciously did for me! http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18382187/
Don't really know what I'm doing, but I felt like being creative, so any criticism would be very helpful.
`I don't really feel confident on my choice of colors. I can't tell if the bush is contrasting or clashing. And I can't tell if the other colors are complimenting each other or muddling together...? Maybe the background should be less saturated?
`I've been told I need to push the shadows further, but I'm too timid to do so >_< . Next time I try something like this I'll try to go much much further and see how it looks :x
`Shading on the cliff face almost certainly needs more stuff going on.
`There probably needs to either be more or less grass on the cliff edge...?
`(Also I did that thing where I forgot to hide the palette layer before posting>_<, fixed now though)
`I think I had the shadows too saturated before, but Bod's suggestion of desaturating them helped a lot. Might need more desaturating though.
`I added a top to the cliff thanks to
sugarboy's suggestion and I think that really helped a lot :3
Anyways, I figured it was about time to just post it. I still really liked how it turned out, but I definitely need a lot more practice. I definitely had a lot of fun either way. So if you have any suggestions, I'd really like to hear them :D
Lineart by
bodbloat
Coloring by
noone
This is an attempt at coloring a sketch that

Don't really know what I'm doing, but I felt like being creative, so any criticism would be very helpful.
`I don't really feel confident on my choice of colors. I can't tell if the bush is contrasting or clashing. And I can't tell if the other colors are complimenting each other or muddling together...? Maybe the background should be less saturated?
`I've been told I need to push the shadows further, but I'm too timid to do so >_< . Next time I try something like this I'll try to go much much further and see how it looks :x
`Shading on the cliff face almost certainly needs more stuff going on.
`There probably needs to either be more or less grass on the cliff edge...?
`(Also I did that thing where I forgot to hide the palette layer before posting>_<, fixed now though)
`I think I had the shadows too saturated before, but Bod's suggestion of desaturating them helped a lot. Might need more desaturating though.
`I added a top to the cliff thanks to

Anyways, I figured it was about time to just post it. I still really liked how it turned out, but I definitely need a lot more practice. I definitely had a lot of fun either way. So if you have any suggestions, I'd really like to hear them :D
Lineart by

Coloring by

Category Artwork (Digital) / Fat Furs
Species Lion
Size 1280 x 960px
File Size 160.6 kB
loved your work and by far this is in my top 3, the other two includes your fatty text game and this http://t.facdn.net/5870672@100-1307212352.jpg
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