Love the variety. :D

Thanks! Maybe it could use some durgons.

Goes without saying.

That buck is so feisty. I look forward to seeing how he'll be getting bushwhacked by karma.

By getting his bush whacked :P

I make no apologies for this awful pun.

*laughs and facepalms*but I love awful puns. I also kinda walked into that one too. He's totally got that coming too.

noice!

Looking forward to this.

Hoping the hot feisty buck boy becomes the shiest girly girl among them.

... also kind of hoping the Little Mousy ends up the biggest one, but of course I would, but that is less likely to happen.

Hey, feedback always has a chance to take root. Honestly I hadn't thought about going in that direction before, but now I'm wondering if that's a possibility. Would have to find some way to grow him up and teach him a lesson at the same time. Certainly ways to do that.

"Would have to find some way to grow him up and teach him a lesson at the same time"

... could be a temporary thing done not so much to punish him/her but to punish others by teaching certain (former) biggers a lesson.

If you are looking for a reason along the lines of a more permanent punishment for him then a good one would be that he likes being small and unnoticeable. It helps him: get away with things, move around secretly, escape easily, and he doesn't like attention that much especially when it is unsolicited. Being a large attractive amazon doesn't really fit with any of that too well and thus could be a punishment

Again though this is all only to my tastes. I am not sure if anyone else likes that kind of thing among your intended audience, which would make it not worth it.

... and I forgot to hit reply to your post ... I have failed at basic FA again. Go me.

lol its on my submission so I get the notification anyway. All good!

I promise to stop bothering you after one last though (sorry for talking your ears off ... or writing your eyes out.) As for elaboration on this statement:

"Hoping the hot feisty buck boy becomes the shiest girly girl among them."

I am also hoping he keeps his original personality so that his/her newfound girliness and shiness make many of his otherwise normal-for-his-original-personality actions and intentions become now difficult or impossible for him/her to do creating a perpetual source of anguish and frusteration. Delicious

Here is hoping for much tsundere in his/her future ... among other things

"What are you a girl or something?"

-Famous last words from an insecure boy before getting TG'd into the girliest girl ever. =P

Looks absolutely delightful. That buck is cute as hell, but not with that attitude, can't wait to see what happens to him. :3

"I promise to stop bothering you after one last though"

... okay apparently I lied ... sorry...

One last thought (before you are forced to block me). If all of them are slated to get TGed I strongly recommend creating a fifth friend for this group; hedosen't need to be as interestimg as the characters you already created for this, he can be really generic and boring as he just there to serve as a very specialized type of foil. Basically someone who, for whatever reason, wasn't around to have a run in with the witch like the rest of the pack. The beauty of this foil from a writing perspective is that once the full pack gets reassembled post fated witchery, there is the possibility for so much more delicious sexual tension/confusion and general hijinks between the "afflicted group" and the odd one out that just isn't as possible otherwise.

Also: any species change? I am mildly interested, but I suggest it mostly because it looks like you are trying to mix things up and doing a species change with the gender change for one or two of them is certainly a way to make thier issues and thus the story more diverse. It would be a bit much and a bit "samey" to do a species change for all of them, but again one or two might inject a bit of extra spice into the mix. This works well from the punishment perspective too. For instance say the little rat guy's bias towards horses was that they are all big, clumsy, useless, lumbering, incompitent, jocks - then turning him into a nice large (possibly clumsy) mare makes an even more cruel punishment. ... or if someone thinks vixens are all loose sluts ... but that example is just my personal interests speaking.

Also: Might I recommend some notes on timing of the transformations?

NOTE ONE: The longer you plan to have this manga be, the longer the transformations will need to be drawn out if you want to keep the comic relevant to the transformation (or, alternatively you can add more new transformations). For example look at Misfile, it has a "poof" transformation right at the begginig and then goes on forever afterwards. The net result is that the comic is mostly about car racing, heaven's beaurocracy, and some young lesbians in denile about being lesbians. Nothing is wrong about any of that if that is what you are looking for, but if you want a comic about gender change then after the start Misfile really isn't it. The gender change is almost incidental to most of the happenings in the story after the beginning.

NOTE TWO: Assymetric timing on changes. If you want the most milage of writting possibilities for sexual tension/confusion and general hijinks among this crew you will want them to change at different rates. Random example: if you throw a near "poof" in with two slow stragglers at slightly different rates, and one who thinks he got away scott free ... until he starts noticing things perhaps starting days later... there is a tremendous amount of interesting story possibilities. One potentially fun way to make a longer-term straggler is to curse one with a sort of "Pinoceos' nose" effect. I.e. every time he does X he changes just a little.

All just suggestions for your consideration, obviously feel free to ignore them. Also really sorry for me endlessly vomiting text on you tonight