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ChibiYuki Hearth's Warming Card (Update 1)
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ChibiYuki Belongs to me,
Also, Resolution of artwork was made full size.Wishing you a Happy Holidays~
ChibiYuki Belongs to me,
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Unicorn
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File Size 991 kB
Ya know, You got a lot of nerve...
But, in consideration of improvement... It's worth looking into, so go ahead.
But I got one rule, you keep future comments clean and positive.
If I don't like your comments and feel they's negative, I will delete them.
I recognize you as an artist, and realize you have talents, but don't push your luck as a poster.
And by the way, I don't dislike your comments, I know i got a lot of things left to learn, but I do not like an introduction that starts rocky and gets worse, it makes you look bad, and me feel bad.
But, in consideration of improvement... It's worth looking into, so go ahead.
But I got one rule, you keep future comments clean and positive.
If I don't like your comments and feel they's negative, I will delete them.
I recognize you as an artist, and realize you have talents, but don't push your luck as a poster.
And by the way, I don't dislike your comments, I know i got a lot of things left to learn, but I do not like an introduction that starts rocky and gets worse, it makes you look bad, and me feel bad.
I don't really care that much. I just prefer to help people improve their art.
http://i.imgur.com/f7EiE59.png This is a rough sketch. I know it's not the best anatomy on the legs, but I am terrible at drawing anthro legs.
Either way. I gave the hat some more thickness and weight on the end so it became more of a realistic santa hat that is more affected by gravity.
The arms have more flesh and muscles to make it feel like it's an actual physical being that could exist. That is why the chest and hips you originally made looks so good because they look like they're something that could really exist.
Ignore my legs. I know they're terrible, but I just wanted to point out that her right leg looked broken since the shading was a bit off in the original.
Now the thing I really wanted to point out as in your previous images is that there is no eyelids. In this art I've added some eyelids to remove the uncanney valley feeling you get from the original.
The hooves is a little bit bigger on mine and the hair is more frazzled, but that is just subjective and could be ignored since I know that drawing hair that way is not your style.
I hope this helped and encourages you to improve your art in the future.
http://i.imgur.com/f7EiE59.png This is a rough sketch. I know it's not the best anatomy on the legs, but I am terrible at drawing anthro legs.
Either way. I gave the hat some more thickness and weight on the end so it became more of a realistic santa hat that is more affected by gravity.
The arms have more flesh and muscles to make it feel like it's an actual physical being that could exist. That is why the chest and hips you originally made looks so good because they look like they're something that could really exist.
Ignore my legs. I know they're terrible, but I just wanted to point out that her right leg looked broken since the shading was a bit off in the original.
Now the thing I really wanted to point out as in your previous images is that there is no eyelids. In this art I've added some eyelids to remove the uncanney valley feeling you get from the original.
The hooves is a little bit bigger on mine and the hair is more frazzled, but that is just subjective and could be ignored since I know that drawing hair that way is not your style.
I hope this helped and encourages you to improve your art in the future.
Fair enough,
The image itself is pretty good, and from what i understand, you see these as improvements:
-More toned Hat affected by gravity.
I actually agree, looking at it myself.
-More tone in arm muscle and detail.
Fair point, I do need to work on the arms more, so i will take muscle into consideration, especially considering she's kinda well toned looking in the pic as is.
-Ignore the legs, fix the shading on the right leg.
Done and done. I'm also going to make her legs more anthropomorphic, you might be onto something there.
-Larger Hooves and Frazzled hair. (Optional)
This is the only one i'm having second thoughts about, i like the size of her hooves, i was never a big fan of larger feet, which is ironic because i have large ones myself irl... The frazzled hair is a valid point, i'll experiment with it, see what works.
And I gotta say, while I was waiting for your last comment, I felt kinda bad about how I treated you, too. So... Sorry.
I do think you're pretty good at figuring this stuff out, so if you really wanna help me improve, I'll listen.
I'll send you a copy of the final draft work first, and we can refine it together.
So uh, thanks.
~CleverDerpy
The image itself is pretty good, and from what i understand, you see these as improvements:
-More toned Hat affected by gravity.
I actually agree, looking at it myself.
-More tone in arm muscle and detail.
Fair point, I do need to work on the arms more, so i will take muscle into consideration, especially considering she's kinda well toned looking in the pic as is.
-Ignore the legs, fix the shading on the right leg.
Done and done. I'm also going to make her legs more anthropomorphic, you might be onto something there.
-Larger Hooves and Frazzled hair. (Optional)
This is the only one i'm having second thoughts about, i like the size of her hooves, i was never a big fan of larger feet, which is ironic because i have large ones myself irl... The frazzled hair is a valid point, i'll experiment with it, see what works.
And I gotta say, while I was waiting for your last comment, I felt kinda bad about how I treated you, too. So... Sorry.
I do think you're pretty good at figuring this stuff out, so if you really wanna help me improve, I'll listen.
I'll send you a copy of the final draft work first, and we can refine it together.
So uh, thanks.
~CleverDerpy
Heh. You flatter me, CleverDerpy.
You have a thick skin, which not many on FA have.
The fact that you listened to me and actually held on until I got my art out makes you one of the best people I've ever known.
That's why I wanted to help you out. Your art is interesting to look at. It just needs a little push in the right direction.
So thank you as well for being an awesome person.
~GameDragon99
You have a thick skin, which not many on FA have.
The fact that you listened to me and actually held on until I got my art out makes you one of the best people I've ever known.
That's why I wanted to help you out. Your art is interesting to look at. It just needs a little push in the right direction.
So thank you as well for being an awesome person.
~GameDragon99
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