Ya i'm entering  kitsunekit's contest i doubt i'll win but it gives me something to post on FA and i'm bored right now AND i've been toying with the idea of another story.

I don't expect too much out of this i don't write well and its kinda long with a what i thought was an anti climactic ending with way to much detail in the begining (look at me critisizing my own story i fail at life)

oh one more thing i expect there to be some "bad spelling" comments just to save you all from the trouble my speel check doesn't work i don't know why