
(This is just a short, two page comic I did involving a couple of my characters)
This comic should be better. See... I already drew it once on notebook paper, and then, at the urging of my friend, redrew it on sketch paper.
I liked the original better, but it's hard to see with all the blue lines. Anyway, here's a narration.
Panel 1. Kiba is sleeping soundly in his divvy nest, sleeping through a thump elsewhere in the house.
Panel 2. A louder thump accompanies the first, waking him up and confusing him.
Panel 3. He sits up and sits on the edge of the nest, calling "Hello?"
Panel 4. A large THUD!! followed by a *crash!* makes him become worried.
Panel 5. An oil lamp, sitting by Kiba's nest on the nightstand.
Panel 6. Kiba lights the lamp with a spark of lux.
Panel 7. Kiba holds the lamp with both hands. "What's going on out there?" he asks no one in particular.
Panel 8. A really loud CRASH!! startles him, (I hate how I drew his ears in this and the next panel)
Panel 9. "WHO'S IN MY HOUSE!?" He yells.(I have no idea where the oil lamp went XD)
Panel 10. Kiba leaves his room and wanders down the hall towards the source of the sound.
Panel 11. He peeks around the corner to the living room, the lamp giving off a weak glow. "Hello?" He calls.
Panel 12. A baseball suddenly comes flying out of nowhere... WHOOOSH! it says. rofl.
To be continued.
This comic should be better. See... I already drew it once on notebook paper, and then, at the urging of my friend, redrew it on sketch paper.
I liked the original better, but it's hard to see with all the blue lines. Anyway, here's a narration.
Panel 1. Kiba is sleeping soundly in his divvy nest, sleeping through a thump elsewhere in the house.
Panel 2. A louder thump accompanies the first, waking him up and confusing him.
Panel 3. He sits up and sits on the edge of the nest, calling "Hello?"
Panel 4. A large THUD!! followed by a *crash!* makes him become worried.
Panel 5. An oil lamp, sitting by Kiba's nest on the nightstand.
Panel 6. Kiba lights the lamp with a spark of lux.
Panel 7. Kiba holds the lamp with both hands. "What's going on out there?" he asks no one in particular.
Panel 8. A really loud CRASH!! startles him, (I hate how I drew his ears in this and the next panel)
Panel 9. "WHO'S IN MY HOUSE!?" He yells.(I have no idea where the oil lamp went XD)
Panel 10. Kiba leaves his room and wanders down the hall towards the source of the sound.
Panel 11. He peeks around the corner to the living room, the lamp giving off a weak glow. "Hello?" He calls.
Panel 12. A baseball suddenly comes flying out of nowhere... WHOOOSH! it says. rofl.
To be continued.
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