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Okay. As you can see this looks like crap. The only panel I spent a bit on was the first one. Besides AVC which I don't know how much longer it will run after 50 until I can come up with a new story arc I'm looking for new ideas.
This is a mock comic to talk about and get some input. First, how is the style? I didn't want to do chibi again but I almost don't know if I like this or not.
Plot, I was thinking that this would contain the adventures of me and some of my friends in life and some of my flash back and future con adventures. I almost always go to a con and something strange happens to me or in general. Fire alarms going off when the whether is like 20F out. That was MFF last year (2008). And I'd try to include humor as much as possible along the way with some points of seriousness.
Another problem is Scripting. I think I would like someone to help me out with that. Like this started off as a good idea but I feel it could have been done so much better or maybe even over more than one comic.
Ideas of how to do background, but that might come a little bit later. I don't want to spend like more than 2 hours working on a comic so I want to keep it simple but not overly simple. Does that make sense?
I think I've covered all of my bases to start. Please take your time to read over all of this and give what input you're able. Thanks everyone and hopefully I'll be able to get on this soon.
This is a mock comic to talk about and get some input. First, how is the style? I didn't want to do chibi again but I almost don't know if I like this or not.
Plot, I was thinking that this would contain the adventures of me and some of my friends in life and some of my flash back and future con adventures. I almost always go to a con and something strange happens to me or in general. Fire alarms going off when the whether is like 20F out. That was MFF last year (2008). And I'd try to include humor as much as possible along the way with some points of seriousness.
Another problem is Scripting. I think I would like someone to help me out with that. Like this started off as a good idea but I feel it could have been done so much better or maybe even over more than one comic.
Ideas of how to do background, but that might come a little bit later. I don't want to spend like more than 2 hours working on a comic so I want to keep it simple but not overly simple. Does that make sense?
I think I've covered all of my bases to start. Please take your time to read over all of this and give what input you're able. Thanks everyone and hopefully I'll be able to get on this soon.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
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Size 1000 x 242px
File Size 91.7 kB
Oooh. I see. *understands now*
The style's fine. If you put a leeeetle moar effort into it, it'd be awesomeereerer. But I understand its just a "fwah!" thing. Also, plot sounds good. Always nice to draw from real life. As for SCRIPTING, I dunno? *laughs* *shrugs* Drain every last drop of funny/awesome you can outta every situation? But overall, i'm not sure what to say, since it looks like you have a pretty good handle on the comic thing already. Tis I who needs halp.
The style's fine. If you put a leeeetle moar effort into it, it'd be awesomeereerer. But I understand its just a "fwah!" thing. Also, plot sounds good. Always nice to draw from real life. As for SCRIPTING, I dunno? *laughs* *shrugs* Drain every last drop of funny/awesome you can outta every situation? But overall, i'm not sure what to say, since it looks like you have a pretty good handle on the comic thing already. Tis I who needs halp.
foxytangerine , the one with the amazing webcomic that makes my eyeballs fall out and fly around the room every Tuesday. 
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