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Category Artwork (Digital) / Fantasy
Species Lemur
Size 1280 x 720px
File Size 172.9 kB
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It isn't too bad up close but from a distance it isn't as eye catching as the nude version.
Something that may help the suit stand out is adding some reflectivity to the suit to make it look more like leather or a synthetic polymer. Just off the top of my head like the suits from the Xmen movies http://www.shelterdist.com/images/341-21.jpg have the kind of reflectivity that would go well with her suit. That image has a bit of a harsh white light, but those wisps in your piece produce a nice bluish purple light that reflected off or her suit in a similar manner would enhance this piece, I'd also say reflect that light off her fur as well to a lesser degree than the suit as well to make the wisps seem more like physical beings in the piece. That would probably add more contrast to the suit further separating it visually from the background.
One last thing that will also help is that light reflects off all objects in a scene. You have clearly defined the light source coming from the forward upper left corner, but the light isn't reflecting off of the floor/wall behind her onto her. Her butt and the back side of her left arm are pitch black by comparison to the rest of her which makes them blend in a lot with the background. Since light reflects off of all surfaces those parts should be a bit more lit up than they are due to the reflected light from the floor/wall. Adding that light will also round out her form more making her seem less flat as well.
I hope this was helpful, and I can't wait to see more of you work in the future.
Something that may help the suit stand out is adding some reflectivity to the suit to make it look more like leather or a synthetic polymer. Just off the top of my head like the suits from the Xmen movies http://www.shelterdist.com/images/341-21.jpg have the kind of reflectivity that would go well with her suit. That image has a bit of a harsh white light, but those wisps in your piece produce a nice bluish purple light that reflected off or her suit in a similar manner would enhance this piece, I'd also say reflect that light off her fur as well to a lesser degree than the suit as well to make the wisps seem more like physical beings in the piece. That would probably add more contrast to the suit further separating it visually from the background.
One last thing that will also help is that light reflects off all objects in a scene. You have clearly defined the light source coming from the forward upper left corner, but the light isn't reflecting off of the floor/wall behind her onto her. Her butt and the back side of her left arm are pitch black by comparison to the rest of her which makes them blend in a lot with the background. Since light reflects off of all surfaces those parts should be a bit more lit up than they are due to the reflected light from the floor/wall. Adding that light will also round out her form more making her seem less flat as well.
I hope this was helpful, and I can't wait to see more of you work in the future.
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