Or I could have also called this "The Dollar Story", as this is my own attempt to see just how a commission story for 1$ of cost would look like.
It was my close friend
Ian-Exe who told me that I should have some good examples for how some of my commission prices would look like as finished stories, as I am going by "One $ per 100 words.". (5$ meant (at least) 500 Words long story, 20$ means a 2,000 word long story, and so on, and so on.)
Since Ian was so smart to tell me this idea, I thought that the most fitting thing would be having him be the subject of my most challenging thing, and that would be to see how a (Around) 100 word long (Or 1$) commission story would look like.
The title says it all as it is just a simple telling of Ian being Inflated.
I hope you all like this little experiment, and that Ian enjoys getting another story from me about him.
(Note! When finished making this the story had a 104 word count if ignoring the 2 word title of it.)
Ian looked down at himself.
Placing at paw on his grey and neon-green fur he could really feel it.
The warm air and the resistance as his paw was trying to sink in into it.
He was inflated really good, as his paw barley made any progress getting down inside.
He could never get enough of this feeling, as he had done this to himself more times then he could count now.
Getting all big and round. (So big in fact that he couldn't even move around!)
This is what he really enjoyed being
A Big, Great, and downright Awesome and Cool Raccoon Ball.
It was my close friend
Ian-Exe who told me that I should have some good examples for how some of my commission prices would look like as finished stories, as I am going by "One $ per 100 words.". (5$ meant (at least) 500 Words long story, 20$ means a 2,000 word long story, and so on, and so on.)Since Ian was so smart to tell me this idea, I thought that the most fitting thing would be having him be the subject of my most challenging thing, and that would be to see how a (Around) 100 word long (Or 1$) commission story would look like.
The title says it all as it is just a simple telling of Ian being Inflated.
I hope you all like this little experiment, and that Ian enjoys getting another story from me about him.
(Note! When finished making this the story had a 104 word count if ignoring the 2 word title of it.)
Ian looked down at himself.
Placing at paw on his grey and neon-green fur he could really feel it.
The warm air and the resistance as his paw was trying to sink in into it.
He was inflated really good, as his paw barley made any progress getting down inside.
He could never get enough of this feeling, as he had done this to himself more times then he could count now.
Getting all big and round. (So big in fact that he couldn't even move around!)
This is what he really enjoyed being
A Big, Great, and downright Awesome and Cool Raccoon Ball.
Category Story / Inflation
Species Raccoon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 24 kB
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