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After being received a nice fanart from 
Snitch based on the second art-trade story I made for him, I decided to do something special.
One of the New Year's promises that I gave myself was that I would be going back to some of my older works and "Re-Make" them, meaning that I would be write them again and improve them to show just how far my writing skills have gone.
I am going to try do this to other stories later this year, but for now I hope that Snitch (And the rest of you) enjoy this new take on Smaug's revenge plans.
Link to the old version of this story: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17179955/
Link to part 1 of the story: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16829525/
Link to the thumbnail image: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18685590/
Thumbnail image is made by Snitch
Smaug and the rest belongs to J.R.R.Tokien
Several years had pasted since the events in which Smaug the mighty Dragon not only got defeated, but also humiliatingly fat by being feed his own gold non stop! (Plus having it as his only source of food for such a long time had also managed to turn his scales into a golden shade of colour, making him look even more like a "Trophy" for his own treasure collection.)
At first he had been almost constantly visited by the dwarf king Thorin, who had been having lots and lots of pleasure and fun, enjoying to see his biggest enemy in a state like this. But as time had gone on he had started to visit (and feed) his "pet" dragon less and less, until eventually he had seemed to have completely forgot about him completely. (I guess even feeding up an obese dragon with gold would get boring after a while.)
But that was all perfect for Smaug, as this meant he had now been given the chance to get free and get his revenge on everyone! And the first step of doing that was to go on a diet! (Not that the golden dragon didn't enjoy feeling the soft fat that was all over him, but he needed to at least be mobile in order for this to work.)
Letting himself starve for a couple of weeks Smaug had managed to lose enough of his extra weight to being able to move once again. (While still being a pretty chubby golden dragon.)
His next part of the plan was to in someway break out of this mountain cell he was stuck in, and he did that by knowing that one of the walls in the large room he was in where the exact same one that was the outside of the mountain, and all he would be needing to do would be to give it a real forceful smash and he would be out!
Since he was a about 1000 pounds heavier then usual Smaug knew that he would have no problems at all being able to be thick enough to attack the wall, and just like a golden coloured wrecking-ball he smashed himself hard against it and made a good portion of it break down and hit the river down at the bottom!
Looking out he could see that it was night-time (Cause that he was being greeted by a full moon), and that was perfect as that meant that most of the dwarfs would be asleep by then.
Now with a big hole open for him Smaug had his escape route, and in no-time the blubbery beast was out flying!...or flying as good as he could do when he looked just like an overstuffed pigeon trying to keep himself afloat!
Eventually he had to rest his very soar wings, and he landed right on top of a small mountain top. It had just enough room for his tubby feet to stand on, but his big hanging gut would have to relay on some spiky sides for support.
From here he could see the city of Laketown down there. Several of the houses being lit up and lanterns placed all over it's borders, making all of the town clearly visible for the vengeful reptile that was looking down at them.
"Sleep tight citizens of Laketown, cause pretty soon you will all pay for turning me into this humiliating excuse of a Dragon!" Smaug said as he simply took and bended forward, and let his fat belly drag him down to build up the speed to glide fly down towards the city.
"Tonight I will dine on humans instead of gold!" Smaug thought, licking his mouth as he could just taste it already. How he would first set fire to the whole place, and then eat the burnt meat of his victims!
Something the big (And now even bigger!) dragon had been taking into his plan was his new appearance. Not was his extra weight a huge problem (In more then one way.) but his golden scales was also a big giveaway of his presence, as they got reflected very easily in the strong moonlight, making him almost look like a golden disco ball in the sky as he got closer and closer to the town!
First it had been a couple of people spotting him as he had been sitting on the mountain top, and by the time Smaug had started his flight down towards them pretty much all of the people living there had been told about the terror coming their way.
Despite being several miles away from them (And currently being just a golden speck in the horizon.) it was still a very big and very pissed off dragon that was heading their way, and they had no idea how to defend themselves against it!
But luckily for them there happen to be a very old and wise wizard named Gandalf that was staying during the night in Laketown, and all the commotion happing right now had got him awake.
"Could someone tell me what it happening here?" Gandalf asked as he was trying to get fully awake.
"Oh Gandalf the Grey, we are in great need of your help!" The tavern owner said, as he went down on his knees and begged for the old wizard to help him.
"With what, my young man?" Gandalf asked, to which the scared man stuttered "With S-Smaug!"
This got Gandalf a little confused as he said, "The Dragon that guards the gold? But I thought the story went that the might Dwarf king Thorin had managed to bind and force him into being in his possession?"
"Have a look for yourself!" The Tavern owner said and pointed to a window next to them that had a small telescope laying on the windowsill. Gandalf went over and looked out the telescope, and saw the bloated sack of gold that was Smaug heading towards them and said, "He seems to have changed slightly since from what I heard of him."
After seeing this Gandalf agreed to try and help stopping this monster from destroying the town, and he asked to speak to the mayor quickly.
"I am so grateful that you where here just when we need someone with such great powers as yourself!" The mayor said as he was getting more and more nervous for each passing moment.
"I think I know what can be used to stop this foul beast." Gandalf said before asking, "Does your town happen to have the "Black Arrow", the one weapon known to penetrate through the thick scales of Smaug and go all the way into his heart?"
The mayor really looked like he didn't want to tell bad news to the great wizard but he had to swallow his pride and say that "Sadly nobody in this town probably even knew that a weapon like that even exsisted."
"Well, that complicates things slightly." Gandalf said, still keeping himself calmed down despite the growing danger that was only getting closer and closer to them!
The wizard looked around at his surroundings for ways to help defend the village, and something that seemed pretty useful was the large amounts of water running both around and through the city at many points. "Using the elements of nature guarding this place will surely be a perfect way to defend against this wielder of fire." Gandalf said, and when saying that final word a very cruel (and hilarious) plan towards the dragon was getting made inside the wizard's head, and he couldn't help but smile over what he was planning for Smaug.
People seeking shelter and running panic could see how this old wizard stood perfectly still in all this chaos, and in that way made himself stand more then anything else as the Dragon was almost at the point of starting to spread the flames! (But that was just what Gandalf was counting on.)
Seeing the tall and old man standing still and starting straight into the eyes of his own, Smaug decided to let this crazy lunatic get the death wish that he so clearly was asking for, and charged up to let out the first fire right onto him!
But that's exactly what Gandalf was predicting Smaug would do as he suddenly did a quick spell that made a large stream of water from the nearby sea shoot up, and hit straight into the open mouth of Smaug as the glow back in this throat had just been starting to light up!
That would have been an easy way to temporally stop the dragon from spewing fire but Gandalf wasn't stopping there, as he just continued to send more water into the golden dragon, and more, and more!
Given that he had been starving himself for weeks Smaug did have a very empty stomach up to this point, but right now that big empty space inside of him was getting filled up with the water by the city!
Despite all of this being very familiar to him Smaug could still feel a slight difference in the situation, as gold was still very solid while water was a lot more...liquid.
If Smaug hadn't been having a hard time already to stay up in the air, he had now as the added weight of the water was making it really, really hard for him!
He tried to fight water with fire, but found it completely impossible thanks to the water having killed his spark!
At last his wings gave up and the now water filled dragon came falling down from the sky!
Smaug was hoping that "maybe at least I will land on top of a few houses?", but instead he landed in the middle of a huge field, just a stone throw away from Laketown.
"S-So close!.." Smaug said before passing out.
As he woke up Smaug was actually hoping to be back "home" in the prison cell, and that what he had been experiencing last night had just been a dream. (As he couldn't stand living with the fact that he had been humiliatingly defeated TWICE now!)
But it was quickly pretty clear to him that this was indeed the case as his first proof was that he was still outside (and experiencing sunlight for the first time in forever.), and when he put his paws on his distant middle.
Usually when doing so he would feel either a state of thick fullness or a slight softness with some hardness underneath (Depending on the levels of gold he had been feed.), but now it was all softness that could be felt and it was shaking and wobbling by his careful touches that it felt like he had been turned into a living water balloon!
Getting the sun in his eyes Smaug turned his head to the side, only to see that he had pretty much everyone gathered to see him!
Gandalf, the villages, and even the Dwarf gang was all standing around him, and staring just at him and his bloated state!
Smaug tried to escape where he was, but found (Just as before) that his added weight was holding him stuck, and he could move away at all! (Being pinned on his back in a very familiar way of how he had used to lay in the prison cell.)
Desperately trying to keep his dignity he tried to make a sudden fire breath to burn the Dwarf King badly, but nothing came out of it! (Indicating that the legendary fire breath of his was sadly no more now.)
He even tried to smack someone with his fat tail, but not even that could work as it moved so slowly and short that anyone could just walk away from it when it came swinging towards them!
But the most embarrassing thing of all had to be that Smaug now had a huge tap mounted over his mouth! And looking around he could see some strange machine built that was pumping up water from the sea, through a pipe, and straight into his mouth!
(Apparently while he had been passing out in the fields they had build this weird contraption, and continued to force water into him during the whole night!)
Not being able to either speak or roar with the big tap in his mouth all Smaug could do was watching how the town's mayor was making himself ready to hold a speech.
"It is with great joy that I thank the wise and powerful Gandalf the Grey for preventing what could have been a huge tragedy for our city when the fearsome Smaug came flying down from the mountain and straight towards out hometown. Had it not been for his quick thinking to clench the flames of the dragon we would have all probably been dead by now."
And with that there was a huge applaud from everyone for Gandalf, before it was Thorin's turn to talk.
"On behalf of all everyone living in Laketown I would like to apologize for laying about having killed Smaug and not told that he was still kept alive in the castle's prison cells, as I thought that it would be impossible for him to escape. After what has happen here now (And almost could have happen.) I have decided to leave over the immobile Smaug to you as gift, and letting you do whatever you want to do with him."
Smaug couldn't believe what he was hearing! Thorin was just going to leave him in this humiliating state, and in the hands of the people that he had just tried to attack!
"Oh boy! This can not end well for me." Smaug thought as he saw the mayor walk up close to his face.
"We are very thankful of your gift king Thorin, as I am sure this will work perfect as a new "Tourist Attraction" for our town." He said ,and patted Smaug water filled belly.
"No! No! No! This can not be how the great Smaug will end his regime of terror!" The dragon thought as he tried to hurt the mayor, but could not move fast enough to make any damage.
"Are you thirsty for more? In that case we will make sure to give you what you wish for." The mayor said, as he ordered the water machine to start pumping again, and Smaug could pretty soon feel how the water was getting poured down into him.
"I am really going to hate this!" The once great Smaug thought to himself.
And so begin a whole new way of living for Smaug as he was now not only once again put in a position of being seen as a "glutton" instead of a "danger", but now he was being seen and watched by all kinds of folks and creatures as the "town attraction" that he now was. (And he knew that once the one that had watched him left town they where going to tell others about what they had seen, and with that all those rumours about what a "dangerous beast" he used to be would soon be replaced with how much of a "water lover" this fire dragon was.)
He could also be called the "Water Balloon Dragon" because of how much his stomach would shake and jiggle when someone was touching him. It was so strange to have almost only water filling up his insides all the time.
And as he laid there being watched by a bunch of travelling hobbits Samug thought to himself how he sadly had it much better when he being feed gold all the time. "At least there nobody but Thorin got to see how I looked like." He thought, and actually started to miss the times of being the king's loyal "Pet".
Snitch based on the second art-trade story I made for him, I decided to do something special.One of the New Year's promises that I gave myself was that I would be going back to some of my older works and "Re-Make" them, meaning that I would be write them again and improve them to show just how far my writing skills have gone.
I am going to try do this to other stories later this year, but for now I hope that Snitch (And the rest of you) enjoy this new take on Smaug's revenge plans.
Link to the old version of this story: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17179955/
Link to part 1 of the story: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/16829525/
Link to the thumbnail image: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18685590/
Thumbnail image is made by
SnitchSmaug and the rest belongs to J.R.R.Tokien
Several years had pasted since the events in which Smaug the mighty Dragon not only got defeated, but also humiliatingly fat by being feed his own gold non stop! (Plus having it as his only source of food for such a long time had also managed to turn his scales into a golden shade of colour, making him look even more like a "Trophy" for his own treasure collection.)
At first he had been almost constantly visited by the dwarf king Thorin, who had been having lots and lots of pleasure and fun, enjoying to see his biggest enemy in a state like this. But as time had gone on he had started to visit (and feed) his "pet" dragon less and less, until eventually he had seemed to have completely forgot about him completely. (I guess even feeding up an obese dragon with gold would get boring after a while.)
But that was all perfect for Smaug, as this meant he had now been given the chance to get free and get his revenge on everyone! And the first step of doing that was to go on a diet! (Not that the golden dragon didn't enjoy feeling the soft fat that was all over him, but he needed to at least be mobile in order for this to work.)
Letting himself starve for a couple of weeks Smaug had managed to lose enough of his extra weight to being able to move once again. (While still being a pretty chubby golden dragon.)
His next part of the plan was to in someway break out of this mountain cell he was stuck in, and he did that by knowing that one of the walls in the large room he was in where the exact same one that was the outside of the mountain, and all he would be needing to do would be to give it a real forceful smash and he would be out!
Since he was a about 1000 pounds heavier then usual Smaug knew that he would have no problems at all being able to be thick enough to attack the wall, and just like a golden coloured wrecking-ball he smashed himself hard against it and made a good portion of it break down and hit the river down at the bottom!
Looking out he could see that it was night-time (Cause that he was being greeted by a full moon), and that was perfect as that meant that most of the dwarfs would be asleep by then.
Now with a big hole open for him Smaug had his escape route, and in no-time the blubbery beast was out flying!...or flying as good as he could do when he looked just like an overstuffed pigeon trying to keep himself afloat!
Eventually he had to rest his very soar wings, and he landed right on top of a small mountain top. It had just enough room for his tubby feet to stand on, but his big hanging gut would have to relay on some spiky sides for support.
From here he could see the city of Laketown down there. Several of the houses being lit up and lanterns placed all over it's borders, making all of the town clearly visible for the vengeful reptile that was looking down at them.
"Sleep tight citizens of Laketown, cause pretty soon you will all pay for turning me into this humiliating excuse of a Dragon!" Smaug said as he simply took and bended forward, and let his fat belly drag him down to build up the speed to glide fly down towards the city.
"Tonight I will dine on humans instead of gold!" Smaug thought, licking his mouth as he could just taste it already. How he would first set fire to the whole place, and then eat the burnt meat of his victims!
Something the big (And now even bigger!) dragon had been taking into his plan was his new appearance. Not was his extra weight a huge problem (In more then one way.) but his golden scales was also a big giveaway of his presence, as they got reflected very easily in the strong moonlight, making him almost look like a golden disco ball in the sky as he got closer and closer to the town!
First it had been a couple of people spotting him as he had been sitting on the mountain top, and by the time Smaug had started his flight down towards them pretty much all of the people living there had been told about the terror coming their way.
Despite being several miles away from them (And currently being just a golden speck in the horizon.) it was still a very big and very pissed off dragon that was heading their way, and they had no idea how to defend themselves against it!
But luckily for them there happen to be a very old and wise wizard named Gandalf that was staying during the night in Laketown, and all the commotion happing right now had got him awake.
"Could someone tell me what it happening here?" Gandalf asked as he was trying to get fully awake.
"Oh Gandalf the Grey, we are in great need of your help!" The tavern owner said, as he went down on his knees and begged for the old wizard to help him.
"With what, my young man?" Gandalf asked, to which the scared man stuttered "With S-Smaug!"
This got Gandalf a little confused as he said, "The Dragon that guards the gold? But I thought the story went that the might Dwarf king Thorin had managed to bind and force him into being in his possession?"
"Have a look for yourself!" The Tavern owner said and pointed to a window next to them that had a small telescope laying on the windowsill. Gandalf went over and looked out the telescope, and saw the bloated sack of gold that was Smaug heading towards them and said, "He seems to have changed slightly since from what I heard of him."
After seeing this Gandalf agreed to try and help stopping this monster from destroying the town, and he asked to speak to the mayor quickly.
"I am so grateful that you where here just when we need someone with such great powers as yourself!" The mayor said as he was getting more and more nervous for each passing moment.
"I think I know what can be used to stop this foul beast." Gandalf said before asking, "Does your town happen to have the "Black Arrow", the one weapon known to penetrate through the thick scales of Smaug and go all the way into his heart?"
The mayor really looked like he didn't want to tell bad news to the great wizard but he had to swallow his pride and say that "Sadly nobody in this town probably even knew that a weapon like that even exsisted."
"Well, that complicates things slightly." Gandalf said, still keeping himself calmed down despite the growing danger that was only getting closer and closer to them!
The wizard looked around at his surroundings for ways to help defend the village, and something that seemed pretty useful was the large amounts of water running both around and through the city at many points. "Using the elements of nature guarding this place will surely be a perfect way to defend against this wielder of fire." Gandalf said, and when saying that final word a very cruel (and hilarious) plan towards the dragon was getting made inside the wizard's head, and he couldn't help but smile over what he was planning for Smaug.
People seeking shelter and running panic could see how this old wizard stood perfectly still in all this chaos, and in that way made himself stand more then anything else as the Dragon was almost at the point of starting to spread the flames! (But that was just what Gandalf was counting on.)
Seeing the tall and old man standing still and starting straight into the eyes of his own, Smaug decided to let this crazy lunatic get the death wish that he so clearly was asking for, and charged up to let out the first fire right onto him!
But that's exactly what Gandalf was predicting Smaug would do as he suddenly did a quick spell that made a large stream of water from the nearby sea shoot up, and hit straight into the open mouth of Smaug as the glow back in this throat had just been starting to light up!
That would have been an easy way to temporally stop the dragon from spewing fire but Gandalf wasn't stopping there, as he just continued to send more water into the golden dragon, and more, and more!
Given that he had been starving himself for weeks Smaug did have a very empty stomach up to this point, but right now that big empty space inside of him was getting filled up with the water by the city!
Despite all of this being very familiar to him Smaug could still feel a slight difference in the situation, as gold was still very solid while water was a lot more...liquid.
If Smaug hadn't been having a hard time already to stay up in the air, he had now as the added weight of the water was making it really, really hard for him!
He tried to fight water with fire, but found it completely impossible thanks to the water having killed his spark!
At last his wings gave up and the now water filled dragon came falling down from the sky!
Smaug was hoping that "maybe at least I will land on top of a few houses?", but instead he landed in the middle of a huge field, just a stone throw away from Laketown.
"S-So close!.." Smaug said before passing out.
As he woke up Smaug was actually hoping to be back "home" in the prison cell, and that what he had been experiencing last night had just been a dream. (As he couldn't stand living with the fact that he had been humiliatingly defeated TWICE now!)
But it was quickly pretty clear to him that this was indeed the case as his first proof was that he was still outside (and experiencing sunlight for the first time in forever.), and when he put his paws on his distant middle.
Usually when doing so he would feel either a state of thick fullness or a slight softness with some hardness underneath (Depending on the levels of gold he had been feed.), but now it was all softness that could be felt and it was shaking and wobbling by his careful touches that it felt like he had been turned into a living water balloon!
Getting the sun in his eyes Smaug turned his head to the side, only to see that he had pretty much everyone gathered to see him!
Gandalf, the villages, and even the Dwarf gang was all standing around him, and staring just at him and his bloated state!
Smaug tried to escape where he was, but found (Just as before) that his added weight was holding him stuck, and he could move away at all! (Being pinned on his back in a very familiar way of how he had used to lay in the prison cell.)
Desperately trying to keep his dignity he tried to make a sudden fire breath to burn the Dwarf King badly, but nothing came out of it! (Indicating that the legendary fire breath of his was sadly no more now.)
He even tried to smack someone with his fat tail, but not even that could work as it moved so slowly and short that anyone could just walk away from it when it came swinging towards them!
But the most embarrassing thing of all had to be that Smaug now had a huge tap mounted over his mouth! And looking around he could see some strange machine built that was pumping up water from the sea, through a pipe, and straight into his mouth!
(Apparently while he had been passing out in the fields they had build this weird contraption, and continued to force water into him during the whole night!)
Not being able to either speak or roar with the big tap in his mouth all Smaug could do was watching how the town's mayor was making himself ready to hold a speech.
"It is with great joy that I thank the wise and powerful Gandalf the Grey for preventing what could have been a huge tragedy for our city when the fearsome Smaug came flying down from the mountain and straight towards out hometown. Had it not been for his quick thinking to clench the flames of the dragon we would have all probably been dead by now."
And with that there was a huge applaud from everyone for Gandalf, before it was Thorin's turn to talk.
"On behalf of all everyone living in Laketown I would like to apologize for laying about having killed Smaug and not told that he was still kept alive in the castle's prison cells, as I thought that it would be impossible for him to escape. After what has happen here now (And almost could have happen.) I have decided to leave over the immobile Smaug to you as gift, and letting you do whatever you want to do with him."
Smaug couldn't believe what he was hearing! Thorin was just going to leave him in this humiliating state, and in the hands of the people that he had just tried to attack!
"Oh boy! This can not end well for me." Smaug thought as he saw the mayor walk up close to his face.
"We are very thankful of your gift king Thorin, as I am sure this will work perfect as a new "Tourist Attraction" for our town." He said ,and patted Smaug water filled belly.
"No! No! No! This can not be how the great Smaug will end his regime of terror!" The dragon thought as he tried to hurt the mayor, but could not move fast enough to make any damage.
"Are you thirsty for more? In that case we will make sure to give you what you wish for." The mayor said, as he ordered the water machine to start pumping again, and Smaug could pretty soon feel how the water was getting poured down into him.
"I am really going to hate this!" The once great Smaug thought to himself.
And so begin a whole new way of living for Smaug as he was now not only once again put in a position of being seen as a "glutton" instead of a "danger", but now he was being seen and watched by all kinds of folks and creatures as the "town attraction" that he now was. (And he knew that once the one that had watched him left town they where going to tell others about what they had seen, and with that all those rumours about what a "dangerous beast" he used to be would soon be replaced with how much of a "water lover" this fire dragon was.)
He could also be called the "Water Balloon Dragon" because of how much his stomach would shake and jiggle when someone was touching him. It was so strange to have almost only water filling up his insides all the time.
And as he laid there being watched by a bunch of travelling hobbits Samug thought to himself how he sadly had it much better when he being feed gold all the time. "At least there nobody but Thorin got to see how I looked like." He thought, and actually started to miss the times of being the king's loyal "Pet".
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