Hello everyone.
This is something I made to keep the time going after I was done with everything else and before I had to do something else. The english may on some parts be very crappy, but it's not my primary language, and I were really tired when I made it. I hope you'll give me tips of what I can improve, as well as continue reading it =P since I'm going to continue the story.
I mean come on, it's the first chapter, what do you expect from me grumblegrumble...
This is something I made to keep the time going after I was done with everything else and before I had to do something else. The english may on some parts be very crappy, but it's not my primary language, and I were really tired when I made it. I hope you'll give me tips of what I can improve, as well as continue reading it =P since I'm going to continue the story.
I mean come on, it's the first chapter, what do you expect from me grumblegrumble...
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 31.5 kB
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