This sounds a lot more like a rondo, actually. The beginning reminded me of Jaws, then the mishmash of.. mess, wasn't very pleasant. When you added an actual melody to it, it sounded pretty cool, though. I like! =D

Thank you, the 'mess' was a couple of previous bars, just with the sustain pedal down, and the previous bars had very dodgy chords!
I suppose you could call it a rondo, although it doesn't quite follow the 'rondo rules'...still, thanks for the input!

Unlike some non-tonal music I've heard, your chords resolve. (Schoenberg's twelve-tone technique... ugh.) My ears thank you!

I really appreciate the almost-but-not-quite tonal part that starts at 0:53. I love playing with expectations, and you veer from tonal theory nicely.

I'm a new composer (as you can hear!), and I'm going to steal your technique of repeating a short section to emphasize that it is a section. (I'm still staying mostly within tonal theory, though. I'm scared to venture too far outside!)

Hey Chipuni, always nice to meet new composers! Thanks for the comments and feel free to steal any techniques I use, 'cause I'll probably end up doing the same to you at some point! =)

That's sounds like some Danny Elfman's composition !

That can only be a good thing! Thanks!

Yeah! Good play, dissonances, impressive!

Heh, I didn't actually play this, my laptop did!!! If you wanted to know, I use Sibelius 5 to write the notation down, then I use Garritan's Personal Orchestra for the computer to read and play it itself! Thanks anyway, I enjoy using dissonance, makes things more interesting!

ok, you didn't play it.. but you've created it, and I sure you, this is great!

Heh, thanks!!!