
Finally, a big chunk of the story. Lord Shade has a private conversation with Duke Bodvar in the study, and Davos is getting a lecture from Uru about dieting.
I think the story is going to turn from here, with a scene of Duke Bodvar and Maria alone in the foyer together, Lord Shade showing the Duke some awkward things that make him nervous, some scenes with Lord Shade and his new playthings, and Count Arconium causing trouble. Here is another episode of "Living Fountain".
I think the story is going to turn from here, with a scene of Duke Bodvar and Maria alone in the foyer together, Lord Shade showing the Duke some awkward things that make him nervous, some scenes with Lord Shade and his new playthings, and Count Arconium causing trouble. Here is another episode of "Living Fountain".
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Oh! My apologies. It's easy to mistake eccentric for evil.
Say, have you read the storyline I've got planned out that Wolfgang can't get enough of?
Say, have you read the storyline I've got planned out that Wolfgang can't get enough of?
you make it sound as if the two are different?
bad is not always evil is my point ;) hehehe *licks fangs*
as for your story.......i do not wish to burst your bubble, but there are sadly way to many along that general feel i have read in the past......while its good for a random slash story, crossover, etc type, i would say just dont go throwing anything HUGELY out there into it^^"
(like some recent failures...ahem twilight ahem)
bad is not always evil is my point ;) hehehe *licks fangs*
as for your story.......i do not wish to burst your bubble, but there are sadly way to many along that general feel i have read in the past......while its good for a random slash story, crossover, etc type, i would say just dont go throwing anything HUGELY out there into it^^"
(like some recent failures...ahem twilight ahem)
If you're suggesting I stay away from the increasingly-popular-outside-of-the-furry-fandom stories, I was already planning on that. The only stories I've used so far are ones I made up and Wolfgang's Living Fountain one. I'm not even gonna touch Twilight.
I even made up a "popular" film to put in. And I'm considering using a TV series I made up eons ago.
I even made up a "popular" film to put in. And I'm considering using a TV series I made up eons ago.
yeah...twilight should not exist...
rules of writing: if yer a fangirl and you write a piece based on your fangirlish thoughts...its failure...
if a movie is made based on that craptastic writing...its even worse failure...
how do we let idiots publis and develop things like that!? O_o
and we even support them by this crap too lol
as for my own workings i do...all are improved, but then i find other things similar like years later lol....which pisses me off XD (mainly cuz i have never heard of the stuff before and then suddenly its existing elsewhere lol)
rules of writing: if yer a fangirl and you write a piece based on your fangirlish thoughts...its failure...
if a movie is made based on that craptastic writing...its even worse failure...
how do we let idiots publis and develop things like that!? O_o
and we even support them by this crap too lol
as for my own workings i do...all are improved, but then i find other things similar like years later lol....which pisses me off XD (mainly cuz i have never heard of the stuff before and then suddenly its existing elsewhere lol)
i was making fun of it...i forogt my random lol to follow it thuogh XD lol...
besides, why would someone who gets excited about dead babies comign into the ER be all about glamour vampires? O_o........my point made XD lol
(yes i actually have gotten excited at work when a dead baby was being brought in lol)
besides, why would someone who gets excited about dead babies comign into the ER be all about glamour vampires? O_o........my point made XD lol
(yes i actually have gotten excited at work when a dead baby was being brought in lol)
no, as i was told a deceased infant was coming in via ambulance i was suddenly into 'must see dead infant!! OMG i have to see one!' kinda mode...my boss was cracking up about it, but she had to help me settle down so i didn't offend the parents^^ lol
(doubt they needed me back there 'so yer kid's a doll now right? can i see it? lol')
(doubt they needed me back there 'so yer kid's a doll now right? can i see it? lol')
This one is not like that. It's a very good side story.
(Her doppelgangers did make a considerable change to it when they told Count Arconium about Maria. That's sure to bring some shadowers to my story's domain.)
I am still curious as to if I (being the author) will put me in the story to meet my characters. Also, her group did not meet up with Lord Shade and Davos yet. (It is after the ball, they might not be in the story...)
(Her doppelgangers did make a considerable change to it when they told Count Arconium about Maria. That's sure to bring some shadowers to my story's domain.)
I am still curious as to if I (being the author) will put me in the story to meet my characters. Also, her group did not meet up with Lord Shade and Davos yet. (It is after the ball, they might not be in the story...)
well unless a being asks my permission to use my own characters, fursona or not, they haven't the right to do such ^^'
and i've not yet seen much on it so i canot say if its truly a good side story or not, therefore why i say it sounds much like many slashes and crossovers i could think of^^'
and i've not yet seen much on it so i canot say if its truly a good side story or not, therefore why i say it sounds much like many slashes and crossovers i could think of^^'
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