Onto the second page,
I should really make a note as to why I decided to do this, or at least some of the motivations behind it. I’ve come to realise that what makes a comic good is the quality of the writing. You can’t just do some nice artwork and then have your characters speaking a load of rubbish you’ve only just thought about.
So I decided to script this before hand and really put some effort and work into the words they’re saying. This may lead to the whole thing seeming a bit forced and unrealistic, but hopefully not.
It sort of explains why a few the pages are quite dialogue based and not all actiony.
I really hope the story holds up.

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