This is beautiful.

~Monhare

thank you ^^

Oh crap, I forgot to write something for you to read O_o

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The water gently rocked the wild creature, swaying it to the beat of the ocean. It slowly danced, it's tail acting as a dancing partner as it moved through the water.

No one would know...

No one would care...

The vile beast they all imagined was nothing more than a lover, something that couldn't hurt something if it tried.

So for now, it dances, gliding through the water while following the beat of the ocean.

No one will know...

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Wow, that was pulled from my butt

What, so now you're writing these just for me? Awe...

A bit of crit. here:

In the line "something that couldn't hurt something if it tried", the second "something" is almost unneeded. (Not that you can edit a comment, anyway XP) It interrupts the flow of the piece.

Otherwise, this was a beautiful piece. Especially since it was "pulled from [your] butt".

Lol yup ^^ or at least with you in mind

... yup, you're right lol should have caught that (If I ever revised my stuff...)

^_^

Heh, that's a new one for me. I don't know what to say, except that I'm pleasantly surprised.

I'm not sure how I caught it. Maybe it's just a writer thing, but that sounds more like poetry than prose.

^_~

Lol XD You ish now my muse... I must do something with this information

^^, Tis my downfall. I sometimes add unnecessary words into my pieces

XD

Uh oh...

I do the same thing, at times. Even in comments I'm sometimes too wordy.

XP

You're super lazy!
XD I remember this one!

LAZINESS FTW!

Blue, the color of the sea.
Wild and untamed.
The creatures which live there
Are much the same.

The water horse,
The lover of the sea,
The protector of its living things,
Entrancing with your beauty,
With thine grace, thine love,
Thine every move,
You draw me closer unto thee.

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Well, that was... interesting. Look what you did to me! You turned me poet!

~X

XD Wow, that is amazing! I love it~

Woots! I turned someone poet! *laughs evilly*

^^

Thanks. I'm submitting that here, now.

Yes, now work a *real* miracle and turn me into an artist.

^_^ Woots! I'll have to read it ^^

Hmmm... I could turn you into a coloring person ^^

All I did was copy/paste into Notepad and save/submit.

What, like you did with Monhare? Eh... Maybe...

Lol ^_^ i commented!

Yesh! Muhahahahaha or you could draw something

That you did.

Well, in my defense, the ring *is* drawn...

WOOTS! XD