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Labbeh's character Anya
Category Artwork (Digital) / Paw
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Size 698 x 1200px
File Size 1017.7 kB
I know you don't like me, but just some friendly pointers hun, you were going for a low angle shot from the eyes of someone shrunk, but you were inconsistent with your linework foreshortening. I recommend next time paying a little extra attention to that, if you are looking up at someone, creases should be overlapping from the bottom up in her clothes, not down. as well as part of her upperbody should be hidden by her lower parts, as well as her hips and such being a bit larger due to being closer to the viewer.
On another note, while the feet look really good, the hard lines bordering the arch give it an almost boxy, cavity feel, rather than a soft arch. if you were to use only the shading to define the arch as one approach, or another would be using horizontal or diagonal lines for wrinkles that shift slightly to follow the contour of the arch without outlining it, you will get a more natural and smooth looking sole.
regardless, keep up the good work.
On another note, while the feet look really good, the hard lines bordering the arch give it an almost boxy, cavity feel, rather than a soft arch. if you were to use only the shading to define the arch as one approach, or another would be using horizontal or diagonal lines for wrinkles that shift slightly to follow the contour of the arch without outlining it, you will get a more natural and smooth looking sole.
regardless, keep up the good work.
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