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Looks like Jake went soft on Chance!
Next page will contain mature content `( ͡°ᗜ ͡°)´
-> Comment please, I love reading feedback :3
If you find typing or grammatical errors, please tell me! I´d like to correct them and improve for new pages! <-
"Yarn in the closet" is a SWAT Kats based gay comic/ fanfiction
Looks like Jake went soft on Chance!
Next page will contain mature content `( ͡°ᗜ ͡°)´
-> Comment please, I love reading feedback :3
If you find typing or grammatical errors, please tell me! I´d like to correct them and improve for new pages! <-
"Yarn in the closet" is a SWAT Kats based gay comic/ fanfiction
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Housecat
Size 1600 x 2000px
File Size 1.85 MB
Listed in Folders
Loving the epic comic, Hun!
May I give a helpful critique? <=]
In the 6th panel (Jake staring @ tv off screen) It would read better as; "Fearing Al's face would pop up on camera...and that he'd spill the beans about T-Bone's real name. In front of the Whole City no less!" or something similar as per your choice ;)
And the audience (us =3) would still receive the same impact as you have it. ^_^
Hope this helped! Please continue on!
May I give a helpful critique? <=]
In the 6th panel (Jake staring @ tv off screen) It would read better as; "Fearing Al's face would pop up on camera...and that he'd spill the beans about T-Bone's real name. In front of the Whole City no less!" or something similar as per your choice ;)
And the audience (us =3) would still receive the same impact as you have it. ^_^
Hope this helped! Please continue on!
Sadly, it has a routine: 3-4 weeks per page
I am sorry, but my drawing is slow and I need a lot of time to edit/ redo things, so they go from "meh looking" to "okay-ish".
Beside, I have college, family and sometimes work to do, which keeps me from doing more pages
I am sorry, but my drawing is slow and I need a lot of time to edit/ redo things, so they go from "meh looking" to "okay-ish".
Beside, I have college, family and sometimes work to do, which keeps me from doing more pages
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