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Critique encouraged! This is my first Thursday Prompt, and I hope to make this a weekly habit to get myself writing more.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 4.7 kB
Tis a nice little slice of life moment, and something that in the same way or a similar way most people experience that sort of moment.
A few errors I noticed while looking through:
Several ' seems to be displaying as " on my screen I don't know if that's my issue or yours though.
This sentence is awkward to read
... a bond that [didn"t matter about men sleeping with men as opposed to women.] "I"ll get them from my mom"s this weekend, if you don"t mind waiting a bit."
You'll likely want to rephrase that a bit.
Otherwise a good first go at the prompts, I wish ya the best of luck.
A few errors I noticed while looking through:
Several ' seems to be displaying as " on my screen I don't know if that's my issue or yours though.
This sentence is awkward to read
... a bond that [didn"t matter about men sleeping with men as opposed to women.] "I"ll get them from my mom"s this weekend, if you don"t mind waiting a bit."
You'll likely want to rephrase that a bit.
Otherwise a good first go at the prompts, I wish ya the best of luck.
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