So, this is the start of the story that I was trying to write for NaNoWriMo, or National Novel Writing Month. Unfortunately, I only got about 3 days into it. So, I kept the story, and decided that I'd work on it some, and post it when I thought it was ready.
This is the prologue, and it's kind of written in a style that's very vague, and generic, but it was necessary to get me into the feel of my story. Feel free to critique, as I know I'm not a writer, but like to do the best I can, so any suggestions will be accepted.
Yes, my Panda Character could probably be considered a Mary Sue, but we'll just get on with it. If Stephanie Meyer can do it, and make 16-year old girls drink her Kool-aid, then I can get some furries to at least read this and give me some help.
I'll definitely need some people to go after Chapter 1, coming up, so anyone interested, comment me, and I'll get you a copy of it to tear apart.
This is the prologue, and it's kind of written in a style that's very vague, and generic, but it was necessary to get me into the feel of my story. Feel free to critique, as I know I'm not a writer, but like to do the best I can, so any suggestions will be accepted.
Yes, my Panda Character could probably be considered a Mary Sue, but we'll just get on with it. If Stephanie Meyer can do it, and make 16-year old girls drink her Kool-aid, then I can get some furries to at least read this and give me some help.
I'll definitely need some people to go after Chapter 1, coming up, so anyone interested, comment me, and I'll get you a copy of it to tear apart.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Panda
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 8.9 kB
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