Nice. Heh, he looks nice and warm in that. Nice snow effect as well.

I really like this picture. The way you've drawn the robes in particular - that's hard to do. x3

If I may give some advice, though, I'd suggest desaturating the reds and greens on his clothing - they stand out an awful lot and flatten the image a bit. Otherwise, it looks pretty awesome.

That's actually what I was aiming for was the reds and greens to stand out a large amount. You see I am trying to give this comic a certain artistic dimension. When you see how the comic is focused, you'll see what I mean. but I have multiple pages to get done before that happens. and thank you for the advice :)

Hey, no problem. I now see what you're trying to do here, though I'm a little skeptical as to how it'd pan out. Bright reds and greens, that kind of reminds me of the Two Strip technicolour process of the 1920s (where only two channels existed - red and green, and the rest of the colours were muted as a result). I'm interested to see how this'll turn out ^^

You are getting it! there is going to be a strange appearance to this comic that I am working on. This comic takes place in a stemapunk world, and it is a very strange world indeed.

I'll be sure to watch out for it!

Ohhhhhh, nice robes and snow ^^

Brrrr that has me shivering! Love the detail!

^^ oh great job

Neat robe design. Looks very warm. ^_^

Looks pretty good! So your requested critique.. Overall I can't see too much that needs a lot of improvement. The face is a little off is all I can say really. How do you do your faces? Do you start with a vague structure or go straight into lining the details? I find that if you start with the shape of the head and circles for what would be the entire size of the eye within the skull, the rest of the details will fall into place :) let me know if you'd like me to show you what I mean some time.
Other than that.. there's something odd looking about the way the fabric lays on his arm there. I'm not as experienced with how cloth should lay and fold over things, so I'm afraid my critique will have to fall a little short. All I can say is use photo refs whenever possible :) even if you think you're sure how to draw something, it never hurts to check against real photos :D
Keep up the great work!

Thank you. Yeah his face didn't turn out right. I knew that. But Also I don't know how to Draw fabirc. One of the bonuses of being a porn artist is you dont have to draw clothing that often, but thats also one of the issues.