its not bad a little work, but not bad i think he'll love it

yay!!!

Dude your doing good but just spend a little bit more time to iron out the details and you will have some nice sketches!

details....hmpf...cant do them

cant and try is different. If all you do is tell yourself you cant, then you wont. Yeah i know i sound like a teacher but hey I am an education major. I know its not easy to try things you feel your not good at, but practicing makes it that much easier to do them. And even if you don't make a masterpiece the first time, youve got pleanty more tries until you feel conforable with it.

It doesn't suck. It's really not that bad, so I faved =p. Good job just spend a lil more time on the details. (then again don't take my word for it...I'm a detail whore. xP)