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Since a lot of folk ask me about the stories behind the artwork, I figured I'd post a few of them here. A warning though...my stories are better then the synopsis...i totally suck at those. ><
A struggling photographer accepts an assignment in a parallel universe and falls victim to a plot to save an alien species.
A struggling photographer accepts an assignment in a parallel universe and falls victim to a plot to save an alien species.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 265.1 kB
The story is very well written, and one of the best transformation/age regression stories I've read in a while. I like the way you focus more upon the way he's treated, and the way he feels as a result of his change. Usually with transformation stories, they end up being five pages of the author describing a tail busting out the seat of someone's pants. Its refreshing to read an actual story with character development for a change.
My one sort of... criticism is that while I know the furry-race is supposed to be advanced, the race came off being a little... Mary-Sueish? Granted the narrator was unreliable and totally in awe of them, but the whole "better than humans in every single way" felt like it was being jammed down my throat, and had me hoping Dr. Freeman would show up to give them a face full of crowbar.
Overall the story is wonderfully written, and I hope to see a lot more of your stuff.
My one sort of... criticism is that while I know the furry-race is supposed to be advanced, the race came off being a little... Mary-Sueish? Granted the narrator was unreliable and totally in awe of them, but the whole "better than humans in every single way" felt like it was being jammed down my throat, and had me hoping Dr. Freeman would show up to give them a face full of crowbar.
Overall the story is wonderfully written, and I hope to see a lot more of your stuff.
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