The Star - A challenging New beginning - Chapter 4
The cat is out of the bag for Chris Jones, and now he must face the consequences of the events in the last chapter.
Colmaton Universe and Ranger belong to
train
BOS belongs to
mojorover
Strikira/Jenna Ronfauni belongs to
wolfrider
War Wolf and Spectra belong to
vivavulpes
Slipestream belongs to
gamegod210
The Star/Chris Jones belongs to me
Colmaton Universe and Ranger belong to
trainBOS belongs to
mojoroverStrikira/Jenna Ronfauni belongs to
wolfriderWar Wolf and Spectra belong to
vivavulpesSlipestream belongs to
gamegod210The Star/Chris Jones belongs to me
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Awesome chapter my friend. What a great way to continue on I love how Christopher Jones, is struggling to fit into the landscape still but it works. His catching of the plane was awesome and dealing with things coming apart that was awesome too. Loved the humor you added as well. Loved how you had not all the public and media come out in support of the Star. There are always going to be detractors. But, you had a nice blend of people being appreciative and even Ranger Kuwana Moore, came around. Didn't expect that. Also, loved the development of War Wolf, Spectra, Strikira, and the Star. The end was a nice tender moment. Can't wait to make time for more.
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