eh I havent ever written a story, SO I hope this one turned out well. I'd like criticism, but dont be tooo harsh. Honest, but not harsh. Im just getting into the swing of this ^^;

maybe I should list this as Mature?


also it's kinda confusing, so bear with it ><;;
Im also thinking of making a role play out of it on some forum. anywho tell me what you think, and wich group you think you would belong to

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"You know, most people always dream of a day in which we can all call each other friend. A day where, that shady person down the street, that woman in the luxury car with tinted windows, that man with the dark suit and fedora, they are no different than you. No richer, no poorer. Everyone has his or her place. A day where you are my friend, dear reader, a friend I have never met. This place is not that utopia. It is no Shangri-La. It is no Babylon. It is no Eden. It is most certainly no Paradise. This place is now hell. Hell on our green earth. Heh…who am I kidding, this earth has long since ceased its title as green. If there are any Colors to define this Place in which we now live, I can only see a spectrum of three. Red, Black, And White."