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Species Vulpine (Other)
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There's probably a lesson to get out of this. Like "Don't put your paw on a bloated tummy full of soda" or even "Don't get in close range of a fox who chugged gallons and gallons of coke just to belch out as loud and hard as possible"...
In any cases, it looks like Vital is gonna learn it the hard way with a huge warm burp right in the face~
In any cases, it looks like Vital is gonna learn it the hard way with a huge warm burp right in the face~
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Fat Furs
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 905 x 1280px
File Size 1.62 MB
Ha, awesome Tiedernas! Great to see more like this from you. There are a few aspects here that work particularly well. First, nice job with the face here, both Vital's wide-eyed look and especially Todd's in the bottom panel. Speaking of Vital's face, his face fur and shirt blowing back in the last panel were nice details. Another thing you did well here was Todd's big belly. It would be good to see you do more big round curves like this, because you use them to show depth well.
Finally, one thing I really appreciate is how you did pencil lettering for the sound effects. Nowadays with digital lettering that's rare to see. It looks like Vital's "You alright" line got a bit squished - do you write the lines in advance and block space for them? That might help prevent space constraints. What you did really well here were the sound effects! The different letter sizes and dragging out the GROOOAN sound effect worked really well. Plus the huge block letters for the burp in the last panel were great!
Thanks again for sharing your artwork Tiedernas! Hope we get to see more like this from you in the future!
Finally, one thing I really appreciate is how you did pencil lettering for the sound effects. Nowadays with digital lettering that's rare to see. It looks like Vital's "You alright" line got a bit squished - do you write the lines in advance and block space for them? That might help prevent space constraints. What you did really well here were the sound effects! The different letter sizes and dragging out the GROOOAN sound effect worked really well. Plus the huge block letters for the burp in the last panel were great!
Thanks again for sharing your artwork Tiedernas! Hope we get to see more like this from you in the future!
As always thanks for your kind comments ^^
I'm quite pride of the expression of the last panel, I didn't even work that much on them, they came out good pretty fast luckily x3 I'm not that hapy the belly in this drawing. The one I draw in "I overdid it again" looks way better, more physicly correct for a belly full of soda o3o
And no, for the small dialogs part I just wrote them down and spent all the time one the drawings of characters and sounds effect to be honnest ^^"
I'm quite pride of the expression of the last panel, I didn't even work that much on them, they came out good pretty fast luckily x3 I'm not that hapy the belly in this drawing. The one I draw in "I overdid it again" looks way better, more physicly correct for a belly full of soda o3o
And no, for the small dialogs part I just wrote them down and spent all the time one the drawings of characters and sounds effect to be honnest ^^"
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