There are a lot of neat ideas in here, but I feel like it's still kinda cluttered and unorganized. Maybe with some mastering or deciding what you want to do with this piece, then it'd sound a lot better. It almost reminds me of an overly compressed dubstep track from like 2012. I look forward to seeing what you can do with all these ideas, hopefully with a more well-rounded product.

Fully agree with this. You have the technique down, but it does seem a bit cluttered and I wasn't really sure where it was going throughout.

Its ment to be sort of melodic future bass mix with EDM, as i said above, i plan on removing stuff and working alot more on this.

There are a lot of ideas, because Im indecisive...... I want the to be a melodic future bass track but at the same time have that grand feel of EDM chords at the same time. But the main point of this track is to show off the parts from 0:00-1:04 and 1:42-the end. As for it sound overly compressed, Im still terrible at mastering a track so thats the last step..

Personally, I think this song is great as it is.

But if you feel like stuff is missing, you might want to try and add some ambiance. Or perhaps more instrument tracks.

I was thinking the same thing, yet it feels cluttered at the same time.

|I was thinking like
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19390834/

Can you make a midi file out of that? and also maybe an arp? <3? <3?!?

updated it

Ah man I love the lead you added!

thanke YOUe