really deep stuff man. i can see where your coming from as I myself am a 16 year old furry in high school...

I think it's something that every fur faces at some point. Trying to find that place of acceptance in a group that is seriously misunderstood. I've found my place now, and this kind of writing is very rare now

Very nice job with this, though I'm glad you're not so alone anymore, eh?

I'm glad those days are passed. I don't ever want to see them come back besides it's hard to feel alone when you finally find somebody to share everything with.

*Hugs in tears*
Beautiful Poetry....
Don't feel alone Konner...I'm here...
*Holds you close*

Lucky you... I'm currently exactly in that period...

That poem does fit perfectly indeed... =/

Anyway, very well written.

I'm pleasantly surprised that somebody found, read, and commented on something I posted so long ago. It seems like everybody has a period like this in their life at some point.

This is something that I look back on, frequently. It keeps me from falling back into that state of mind.

I've wanted to touch it up, and make it actual poetry, but it seems like it would just take away from what it means.

Everything gets better, it just takes some time. Don't let the thought of being alone consume your mind, it will only destroy you if you let it.

Well, everything gets better.. sadly, I have to disagree so far.. everything just got worse and worse for me.. but that is a different story..
But I agree that proably everyone gets this in tehir liefes - just for some it is pretty much the whole life so far... Sure, there were one or two people who one could trust etc, but for me, it was pretty much that I always had most people against me.. and I have no idea why... But sure as helöl, it made my life a heck of a lot harder, plus, often got my marks in school to fall drastically..

Maybe you should make a new one, a longer one, but about the same topic..?

I know the feeling. I've had many ups and downs in my life, and a lot of the people I call friends I can't trust with anything. School is never a walk in the park. It's just a terrible social experiment where the parents don't have to be involved. Like everything else, it's only temporary.

Dwelling on how bad things are currently will never give you the opportunity to make things better. The bad times never last, and it really does get better with time. I've seen it, I've lived, and that poem represents a past time that hasn't come back around for me yet.

I might take that idea and go with it though. Maybe expanding a bit more on the topic rather than trying to simply fix the original.

Well, I could've understood it if it was just in one school, but no matter where I was, things did not change... I was pretty much THE outside, no matter what - and that temporary time has left some serious permanent marks I still notice..

Well, It is hard to see anything positive, if all that happened, no matter what past the last 7 years or so, only worsened everything...So ulimately I went from my bad school time, to the worse thing it is now. In the beginning I thought baout it exactly that way, that I will be alright anyway.. but after 5 years of events, which destroy everything I worked for, throwing every attempt to so something better right into the bin, I don't really have the strengh anymore to do anything like that. I was quite creative once... wrote stories, drew pictures etc... but of that, hardly anything is left - all that there is is this feeling of hating to get up every morning, already knowing what will happen anyway - and having no strengh anymore to break free of that. for so many years, I tried so many things.. and every time something happened which made everything collapse... even if it wasn't a difficult plan at all.
I have nothing here I could live for... and I can't really break free of this anymore... it's a devils cyrcle. If I earn al ittle more money, the'll come from everywhere and take it (taxes, and so on), or if they don't, something important will break and needs to be replaced...

Well, I could go into greater detail, but I don't want to write long books in such a comment section...