Chapters 5 and 6 of my series. I decided to keep it clean sinse i AM basing it on the game and not my dirty mind. >.<

I also notice my writing is improoving a bit with each of these that I write, so it prooves as good practice.

All characters and locations are, for the most, copyright to Nintendo and Rare but i doubt anyone from wither company really cares what I do.

So read up, comment if you can, and PLEASE enjoy my story.