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This isn't a commission, I was just chatting with Deiser and we came up with hot ideas. I'm not doing commissions, only hot ideas. Also I'm happy with that coloring style, a page like this ought to take less time than one PANEL from my pay comics.
This isn't a commission, I was just chatting with Deiser and we came up with hot ideas. I'm not doing commissions, only hot ideas. Also I'm happy with that coloring style, a page like this ought to take less time than one PANEL from my pay comics.
Category All / Transformation
Species Rabbit / Hare
Size 1100 x 1682px
File Size 1.56 MB
Ah, didn't mean it like that! I took a second look at the comment and at your colored pieces in the main gallery (just to make sure I wasn't talking out of my ass), and sure enough not only was I talking out of my ass but I wasn't even using the term in the way I wanted to. That's what I get when I try to make a rational argument after a long day with little sleep the night before...
I think I've figured out what I like so much about this style compared to your traditional style: it actually meshes with how I expect light to behave when interacting with the materials you used here. I mean, the shading model you used on the skin looks like how I'd expect skin to look (perhaps a bit on the shiny side, but not enough to violate my suspension of disbelief, especially when we're dealing with magic), the shading on the clothing looks consistent with how I expect clothes to appear, and the fur on her tail, little as there might be, could pass as fur instead of some material that looks a whole lot like oiled skin. I mean, it's not inherently bad (I try to decouple execution from personal style when criticizing something), but I think this new technique meshes a lot better with your lineart.
For all it's worth, I noticed that you were playing with the faces a bit earlier in the comic; in particular, I liked the ass slap on P1, most of P2's faces, and the top row of P3. I think they added a little bit more energy into the scenes, which for something like this is always welcome. I'd really like to see you play with it a bit more in the future.
On a somewhat unrelated note, if you ever need someone to criticize your work, just ask. I know from firsthand experience how utterly frustrating it is to be told something you made is "good" when you aren't satisfied with it; while I can't guarantee I'll know or use all the terms correctly, I can guarantee I'll try to unfilter myself and speak freely about just what it is bothering me.
I think I've figured out what I like so much about this style compared to your traditional style: it actually meshes with how I expect light to behave when interacting with the materials you used here. I mean, the shading model you used on the skin looks like how I'd expect skin to look (perhaps a bit on the shiny side, but not enough to violate my suspension of disbelief, especially when we're dealing with magic), the shading on the clothing looks consistent with how I expect clothes to appear, and the fur on her tail, little as there might be, could pass as fur instead of some material that looks a whole lot like oiled skin. I mean, it's not inherently bad (I try to decouple execution from personal style when criticizing something), but I think this new technique meshes a lot better with your lineart.
For all it's worth, I noticed that you were playing with the faces a bit earlier in the comic; in particular, I liked the ass slap on P1, most of P2's faces, and the top row of P3. I think they added a little bit more energy into the scenes, which for something like this is always welcome. I'd really like to see you play with it a bit more in the future.
On a somewhat unrelated note, if you ever need someone to criticize your work, just ask. I know from firsthand experience how utterly frustrating it is to be told something you made is "good" when you aren't satisfied with it; while I can't guarantee I'll know or use all the terms correctly, I can guarantee I'll try to unfilter myself and speak freely about just what it is bothering me.
So you're saying, the above simple comic looks more realistic to you, than this more elaborate style https://www.furaffinity.net/view/17971527/
Whelp, time to get back to work for the remaining ~70 hours of coloring work on an elaborate coloring project, knowing that it's inferior to something I slapped together in a day 9_9
Whelp, time to get back to work for the remaining ~70 hours of coloring work on an elaborate coloring project, knowing that it's inferior to something I slapped together in a day 9_9
...I'm not good with words ._. Okay, gonna try to be short this time, hopefully without sounding like a bigger ass than I already made myself out to be...
I like the shading style used here; it's different than your normal shading style, and I think it works a bit better with your artistic style. It's worth noting that I typically like flatter shading styles when consuming many types of media; your traditional shading style isn't bad, but it's not necessarily my personal preference. As an example, I love SabertoothErmine's sketches, inks, and flat colored pieces, but her high fidelity and extremely detailed works fall a little too far into the uncanny valley for me to like as much. It's not bad, not at all; it's just not my preference.
...I'm really not good with words...
I like the shading style used here; it's different than your normal shading style, and I think it works a bit better with your artistic style. It's worth noting that I typically like flatter shading styles when consuming many types of media; your traditional shading style isn't bad, but it's not necessarily my personal preference. As an example, I love SabertoothErmine's sketches, inks, and flat colored pieces, but her high fidelity and extremely detailed works fall a little too far into the uncanny valley for me to like as much. It's not bad, not at all; it's just not my preference.
...I'm really not good with words...
>bigger ass than I already made myself out to be...
You're not doing anything wrong, and I do need honest feedback to get better. It's just frustrating sometimes.
Ah, your personal preference. Well, you're not the first person to say this either. So I'm going to experiment, but also work on the assumption that the previously satisfied people would keep quiet, skewing the feedback.
You're not doing anything wrong, and I do need honest feedback to get better. It's just frustrating sometimes.
Ah, your personal preference. Well, you're not the first person to say this either. So I'm going to experiment, but also work on the assumption that the previously satisfied people would keep quiet, skewing the feedback.
I'm shocked that it took this long for someone to ask heh. Normally I get a dozen comments "can you draw them fucking?"
Anyway I had no plans for it, the best parts have already happened IMO. I'm trying to focus on hot TF stuff more instead of just getting lazy and drawing sex.
Anyway I had no plans for it, the best parts have already happened IMO. I'm trying to focus on hot TF stuff more instead of just getting lazy and drawing sex.
to be fair i love your tf's :D my personal fave ones being the one that shows only quickly the feral dogs breeding with the newly tf'd people and theese big busty girls thinking there humans but everyone sees them as animals <3 thats all brilliant to read :D
personal fave the one with the two sisters in the dog shelter :P
personal fave the one with the two sisters in the dog shelter :P
TFTG through degradation, a very hot concept indeed.
Another hot concept I've rarely found going around is where someone with a lot of perverted ideas describes what his 'ideal partner' would be like to someone else and unknowingly turns while doing so.
I swear I've seen someone who did a TG with that idea somewhere, but I can't seem to find it so I'm not sure if it was actually just written story or not.
Another hot concept I've rarely found going around is where someone with a lot of perverted ideas describes what his 'ideal partner' would be like to someone else and unknowingly turns while doing so.
I swear I've seen someone who did a TG with that idea somewhere, but I can't seem to find it so I'm not sure if it was actually just written story or not.
No one can find it heh, it's named differently https://www.furaffinity.net/view/14634433/
I should really do something about this someday...
I should really do something about this someday...
http://dynamoob.deviantart.com/gall.....y-at-the-Beach It was probably this. And then here's a more recent one (describing his gf), but the account just got deactivated so good luck http://goldendawn69.deviantart.com/.....8720&qo=83 (The renders weren't as hot, btw)
Anyway yeah the concept is pretty hot heh
Anyway yeah the concept is pretty hot heh
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