FA+
Shop
201
Views
Views
0
Favorites
Favorites
Category
Story / All
Species Rodent (Other)
Size 120 x 100
File Size 34.5 kB
Report this content
More from Yosh-E-O
Listed in Folders
Kazootles! This night has sure gone far differently than Sai had ever planned. Now, trapped between two very emotional males, what will Sai do? Read on to find out!
CREDIT NOTES:
So, to all those reading this, please note that it was Winged Ham-Ham's idea and talent that brought this amazing tale of love and friendship together.
On another note, if you don't mind me sharing, my oh-so lovable look was first conceived by Winged Ham-Ham. Before her, I had no idea how to properly depict my fursona. So, when you see my beak flutter out a "Gabby-Gabby-Gaboo!" know that it was Winged-Ham-Ham who was clever enough to make this Yoshi Ducky as quackers as he is.
Please enjoy and feel free to comment. Also, if you would like Ham-Ham, I encourage you to welcome comments from readers as to their thoughts on your concept. Like I said, it was too good to not finish. :)
ADDITIONAL NOTES:
This portion of the story was written entirely without the use of vision using the delightful, screen-reading program, JAWS. Upon completion, I used my sight for a mere matter of moments to complete some edits which include tabs that, for some reason, JAWS seems inclined to screw up to no end while I'm writing. No matter though, I'm proud to say I only edited some errors with my vision. Gabby-Gabby-Gaboo!
CREDIT NOTES:
So, to all those reading this, please note that it was Winged Ham-Ham's idea and talent that brought this amazing tale of love and friendship together.
On another note, if you don't mind me sharing, my oh-so lovable look was first conceived by Winged Ham-Ham. Before her, I had no idea how to properly depict my fursona. So, when you see my beak flutter out a "Gabby-Gabby-Gaboo!" know that it was Winged-Ham-Ham who was clever enough to make this Yoshi Ducky as quackers as he is.
Please enjoy and feel free to comment. Also, if you would like Ham-Ham, I encourage you to welcome comments from readers as to their thoughts on your concept. Like I said, it was too good to not finish. :)
ADDITIONAL NOTES:
This portion of the story was written entirely without the use of vision using the delightful, screen-reading program, JAWS. Upon completion, I used my sight for a mere matter of moments to complete some edits which include tabs that, for some reason, JAWS seems inclined to screw up to no end while I'm writing. No matter though, I'm proud to say I only edited some errors with my vision. Gabby-Gabby-Gaboo!
Category Story / All
Species Rodent (Other)
Size 120 x 100px
File Size 34.5 kB
Listed in Folders
Hehe, oh wow! I didn't expect that at all, the story got really tense! :3
The whole looking back at the owl thing, I definitely would have done. 8D They are a couple of smart hams! :3 Sai was a neat little hero, rushing around to save her friend! Even if she was the reason he was in danger too. :B
Sounds like a really stressful, emotional night for them all though. Hopefully they can go relax in their cage and slowly figure out what to do from here on out or something! :3
And you're signature "Heck," was in there too. 8D That's the easiest way to tell it's something you wrote. ;P
I'll look forward to the next part too!
The whole looking back at the owl thing, I definitely would have done. 8D They are a couple of smart hams! :3 Sai was a neat little hero, rushing around to save her friend! Even if she was the reason he was in danger too. :B
Sounds like a really stressful, emotional night for them all though. Hopefully they can go relax in their cage and slowly figure out what to do from here on out or something! :3
And you're signature "Heck," was in there too. 8D That's the easiest way to tell it's something you wrote. ;P
I'll look forward to the next part too!
<LoL!> <LoL!>
Kazootles! *blush* You know, of all the writing classes I've taken, and people I've talked to, they all mention how every author has a "trademark." I would've never guessed that to be mine. <LoL!> Though, furthering this point, is how ONLY outside readers can spot the trademark. *cush-cush* Now that I think of it, though, I do use that has been my utility word. Oh, heck! :)
Oh, as the title says, they were all a couple of "Reckless Rodents." Quite honestly, as I wrote about the owl, I was reminded of how, in Hamtaro's second episode, when Hamtaro saved Penelope from the cat. There were a few times I had to "change channels" in my head to keep the owl from going all feline for no reason. :)
As you can imagine, this scene has set the stage for the "Talk." I'm just elated that, in the end, I will succeed in the goal first set by the project. :)
Gabby-Gabby-Gaboo!
Kazootles! *blush* You know, of all the writing classes I've taken, and people I've talked to, they all mention how every author has a "trademark." I would've never guessed that to be mine. <LoL!> Though, furthering this point, is how ONLY outside readers can spot the trademark. *cush-cush* Now that I think of it, though, I do use that has been my utility word. Oh, heck! :)
Oh, as the title says, they were all a couple of "Reckless Rodents." Quite honestly, as I wrote about the owl, I was reminded of how, in Hamtaro's second episode, when Hamtaro saved Penelope from the cat. There were a few times I had to "change channels" in my head to keep the owl from going all feline for no reason. :)
As you can imagine, this scene has set the stage for the "Talk." I'm just elated that, in the end, I will succeed in the goal first set by the project. :)
Gabby-Gabby-Gaboo!
I've noticed it in a number of your stories! :3 Everyone has their own way of talking, and that's definitely one consistency you have. (:
Oh yeah! I didn't think of it when I was reading, so I guess that means you did a good job of making it your own! even with some familiar Hamtaro sounds. But if it ended up like "The owl hissed and clawed at the hams, screeching, 'meoooow!'" then maybe I would have noticed you were struggling. 8D Sounds fine to me though. :3
And yup! All the little critters are back together again, and now that the main parts of the story have pushed them all emotionally, they could use some little chat about now. :3
Oh yeah! I didn't think of it when I was reading, so I guess that means you did a good job of making it your own! even with some familiar Hamtaro sounds. But if it ended up like "The owl hissed and clawed at the hams, screeching, 'meoooow!'" then maybe I would have noticed you were struggling. 8D Sounds fine to me though. :3
And yup! All the little critters are back together again, and now that the main parts of the story have pushed them all emotionally, they could use some little chat about now. :3
Yep, yep, yep! You got it!
Once again, thanks for your input yesterday. It made writing today's section all that more rewarding. Heck, because of it, I've actually improved my writing proficiency. Today, I wrote this and a chapter of "Project: Ezil" in the time spanse of only 2 hours! Gabby-Gabby-Gaboo!
Once again, thanks for your input yesterday. It made writing today's section all that more rewarding. Heck, because of it, I've actually improved my writing proficiency. Today, I wrote this and a chapter of "Project: Ezil" in the time spanse of only 2 hours! Gabby-Gabby-Gaboo!
You know what, MJ. You have officially made my whole day by saying what you just did.
As a writer, I don't just want my work to transport others into the amazing worlds I am able to get in tune with. I also want those who read it to feel inspired to either come up with their own ideas for how the story could go, or better yet, be driven to pick up their pen, or keyboard, and have at it themselves.
I look forward to all of which you will be sharing with us in the near future. As always, it's a pleasure to share thoughts and stories with you.
As a writer, I don't just want my work to transport others into the amazing worlds I am able to get in tune with. I also want those who read it to feel inspired to either come up with their own ideas for how the story could go, or better yet, be driven to pick up their pen, or keyboard, and have at it themselves.
I look forward to all of which you will be sharing with us in the near future. As always, it's a pleasure to share thoughts and stories with you.
Comments