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Now in a fixed .txt format for easy reading.
This chapter can stand on it's own if you weren't looking to check out the whole series (though doing so is certainly worth it!) It is part of an action-adventure, war story serial.
In this chapter, a group of desperate dragons try to make their way to cover from the artillery and flack that has been keeping them down.
Some content advisories apply, as there is mild swearing and some descriptions of war. The "refined" thumbnail indicates that this story has gone through several revisions.
This chapter can stand on it's own if you weren't looking to check out the whole series (though doing so is certainly worth it!) It is part of an action-adventure, war story serial.
In this chapter, a group of desperate dragons try to make their way to cover from the artillery and flack that has been keeping them down.
Some content advisories apply, as there is mild swearing and some descriptions of war. The "refined" thumbnail indicates that this story has gone through several revisions.
Category Story / All
Species Western Dragon
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 8.9 kB
Bugging out of this hell hole? Buggering off might be more appropriate, although since that's a British term it might not fit.
Other than that, your writing style has improved a lot. I was still irked by the mentions of wings, tails, etc, but I suppose it can't be helped; this IS furry fiction, after all. Just so long as it's done in moderation you won't look a complete twit.
I can find nothing to complain about other than that one little thing.
Other than that, your writing style has improved a lot. I was still irked by the mentions of wings, tails, etc, but I suppose it can't be helped; this IS furry fiction, after all. Just so long as it's done in moderation you won't look a complete twit.
I can find nothing to complain about other than that one little thing.
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