Hurray! After many hours of typing back and forth and some editing, here's the co-write between me and the talented MojoRover, and we had a great time doing it ^^. Now, my version may be different from Mojo's because I editied this by myself after running through it with Microsoft Word, so I hope noone (including Mojo) gets mad about that ^^;

Anyway, the story follows a nerdy, twitchy cheetah named Frank, who has decided to become Colmaton's newest supervillain under the alias Jolt, but he's going to handle things differently from your average supervillain

Meanwhile, Ji-Lin Hue, otherwise known as Crimson Cur, is assigned by the American Bureau of Superheroes to capture the supervillain before he causes anymore trouble. As Jolt dodges left and right with Crimson Cur and her friend Lone Wolf hot on his trail, Jolt comes to realize things will not be as easy as he thought. Has colmation's newest villain bitten off more than he can chew?

Well, read and find out! :P

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The City of Colmaton:  TRAIN

Frank/Jolt and David:  n00b678

Ji-Lin/Crimson Cur: Computer Dinosaur (shared with  MojoRover)

Alice/Lone Wolf and all America Bureau of Superhero characters:  MojoRover

(If I messed up on the copyrights PLEASE let me know immediately)